Wonderful story! I really enjoyed it! Perfect!

Cute

Ha Ha Nice this was good and funny

great story!

holy crap! that was hott!

It was okay, but you know how I love my AO. Blame my friend Alex for making me read EO stories at school during study hall... but blame her for getting me hooked on to begin with lol. :] loved your story Lunch.

That was very lovey-dovey wonderful stuff. EO forever!! Excellent striptease idea.

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that was so hot.

*goes to take cold shower*

LOVE IT.

I love E/O smut and think you did a great job with this. I think there could be a bit more detail, but I do know how hard it is to write first time sex scenes. Thanks for sharing.

Damn!! Olivia Dropped it like its hot? And Elliot picked it up? YAY!

OOH... Good update!! I loved this!!

EO!
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