COOL! This was so cute! When did it happen? Oh well.m Nice Job!

very cute for a drabble, but it lacked the grace you need to write something that short and make it good. Some of the phrases are awkward. I have issues with that too, but if you write more words then all of them don't have to be perfect. Plus, what does he want to do?

A great one shot. Good job capturing Ron's feelings. Keep up the good work.