mou...
there should've been more fluffs coming from AyuHiyo!
-.-

so touching~

ayumu-kun, finally, you realized that hiyono was there, by your side +sob+

Wow. It seemed very deep to me. All those feelings, and then Hiyono just dissipates the rather tense mood. Like it. A lot.

Very simple--I like it.

~Aery

Awwh, This was incredibly cute.
Nice use of words, I must admit.
Keep up the good work.

Simplistic... and yet so expressive.

Well done! =3

Aww...How adorable! =D

Viz or someone needs to license the series. argh...

you're back :)

"...he has never once seen her until this very moment."
i like this line. it's very much your style, your way of capturing Ayumu's frame of mind.

revival of my spiral obsession? i think so. hope to see more of your new writing!

Oh wow, you're back! I had wondered what had happened to my regular dose of excellently characterized, well-written Spiral stories that brightened up my day, and now they (and you as well) are back. Welcome back to the fold, we've all missed you.

Short but sweet. I like it. ^_^.

Hmm, I like very much. Quiet and very Ayumu-ish, and a accurate (and very cute~) description of his relationship with Hiyono ; the part about her name especially, almost made me squeal. A bit too short, but I'm sure that was the point, so it's alright. You've got a good grip on these characters, don't be afraid to keep writing about them :D