Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: Chakra focus

Lostcause13
2008-03-15
ch 1,
abuseWow, i seriously like fell of my chair. Really funny!
dawnblossoms
2008-02-22
ch 1,
abuseI really LOVED this one as well, short and sweet. :P It REALLY made me laugh, which is kinda hard to do, i swear. All those years of reading Terry pratchett must have immunised me somehow. I REALLY hope you'll write WAY more GaaSaku fics for me to bath in their glow or something. I really really love the way you write, coz its always soo well thought out. But then, i guess you're 27, and that sorta steadies you a bit. Hey, i might be as good as you are when Im the same age. Wont that be AWESOME? ^^
bb
2008-01-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow... very over-exaggerated and not funny at all.
Morien Alexander
2007-10-11
ch 1,
abuseLoved it. Maybe Sakura's boobs will get bigger...
SnickyPop
2007-09-01
ch 1,
abusehahahahaha, VERY perverted to a passerby...
Dreamergirl92813
2007-06-12
ch 1,
abuseinteresting(in a good way^_~) please continue
Hiei's Cute Girl
2007-03-19
ch 1,
abuseI think you should go with the idea of Gaara finding it. I can almost imagine his 'wtf?' expression when he finds it! XD It's be a blast to read, you know?
MangaOtaku21
2007-03-07
ch 1,
abuseLOL! loved it, please use it in "A marige.." it would be hilarious! XD it was so funny “…Will it at least make my breasts grow bigger?” too much for my poor abs. some day, I'll make you pay. I have a preety six pack now!
Xsakurafan101X
2007-03-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseLOL
anon
2007-03-06
ch 1, anon.
abusewas funny.
amanda
2007-03-06
ch 1, anon.
abusehaha loved it
Return to Top