Awesome job !

This is insane! So good! Ive only read the first chapter but this seems really good. I cant believe how young you are- you definitely write maturely for your age (I totally mean that as a compliment). I cant wait to read the rest. Keep up the writing- youre really good at it!

Aw what an amazing story! I absolutely loved it!

Wonderful story! I just sat and read the whole thing. I was in tears at various points of the story. I just wanted to wrap my arms around Sara and make her feel loved.

sweet, I like it :)

Well at least her dad seemed nice before he got drunk. But they both really are horrible. I'm glad that Sara's telling Catherine all of this, at least she's getting it out in the open and actually talking about it now instead of keeping it all bottled up.

Glad Sara had enough trust in Catherine to tell her the whole story or part of it and that she didn't run away the first chance she got.

Well Catherine really didn't have much to drink so she can't really blame any of it on alcohol can she? As for Sara I'm sure she'll be able to. Now that they haven't really talked about anything and are about to have sex they're gonna have to talk about it all later. Great chapter!

Right down to the point of the matter. Looking forward to what happens between the two of them now. How Sara reacts to it as well.

aw .

lots of angst there... Really nice story, beautiful. :-)

loved it grat work can't wait to read more of your work.

Well written story. Very nice buildup with great dialogue. Thanks for sharing it.

Great story! that's pretty much all I can say really. I'm just speechless is was that good.

Happy ending, yea!

You must've written this one while I was on my way, because I didn't see it! Nice job, as always :).

There are a couple of romantic concepts in this last few chapts that I personally liked very much:

-two person in the same dream,

-Cath's blood flowing in Sara's body (they are one now),

-and the "There’s room for two"

It's a little sweet and happy ending, am glad the Dream's chapt's only a scare thing, somehow that make us thought's Sara's dead or something, am glad that's just a hoax. :D

Thanks for the story! :]