I loved this fanfic. It was pretty good. You did nice work on the discriptions and the speech. I feel sorry for Reeve. Poor guy. This was a nice angst fanfic.
The funny thing is, I'm working on a fanfic similar to this It's not EXACTLY like this but it's similar except it's more of the son's side of the story than the father's. I haven't gotten to the father's side of the story yet. I got a long way to go. I have it posted and have many chapters done. Sorry, I'm jabbering about nothing.
Keep up the good work.