 TacoKing23 2/10/11 . chapter 8This really has been an interesting story. It's too bad it's been left alone for so long, perhaps even dropped altogether. Ah, well. These things happen. |
 Concolor44 12/9/10 . chapter 8AAAIIIIYYEEEEEEEEEE!
THERE IS NO CHAPTER NINE. |
 Concolor44 12/9/10 . chapter 7Raven must have IRON control over her empathic abilities not to feel all the turmoil in Jinx's mind.
The ex-FEMALE thief seems to be getting entirely too comfortable with her male role. I fear this will end badly. |
 Concolor44 12/9/10 . chapter 6Well APPARENTLY Jinx makes a pretty hot guy. At least two different women seem to think so. Must be the hair. ;-D
She's right, though. She nearly got busted. She's going to have to think some things through. And maybe leave Jump. |
 Concolor44 12/9/10 . chapter 5Jinx can now die happy? That's fortunate, 'cause I think Robin wants to kill her now, and Raven will want to kill her later.
That kissing scene was pretty hot. |
 Concolor44 12/9/10 . chapter 4Those pithy descriptions of the Titans? Solid gold.
Nevertheless I've got this overarching, ominous, malevolent Big Ol' Cloud O' Doom peeking over my shoulder that refuses to go away. Jinx can't keep this up forever, and when Raven finds out who she is ... well, it won't be spiffy. |
 Concolor44 12/9/10 . chapter 3So, okay, Cyborg said his - her - Jinx/Ryan's injuries weren't too bad, when actually they were. But at her accelerated rate of healing, she should be able to mimic simply being banged up badly.
But ... seriously ... through two buildings? THROUGH two buildings? Yeah, metahuman, but not freaking indestructible! She ought to be PUDDING after that!
Raven seems to be falling pretty hard, all things considered. |
 Concolor44 12/9/10 . chapter 2Not slow, not choppy. Well-paced and interesting.
Raven has a cru-ush, Raven has a cru-ush!
And I get the idea that Robin has some feelings he's careful to keep from her as well. That could get ... dicey. |
 Concolor44 12/9/10 . chapter 1Cool. Jinx passing for a boy. While clever, that is not much of a stretch, given her extra-trim physique. I'm glad you thought of this, though.
Your first fic? Truly? Not your first stab at writing, though, is it? While there is the occasional typo and punctuation snafu, on the whole it reads well. And you have potential here for a dandy plot. |
 darknessislight 12/3/10 . chapter 7I realize this is swapped, but reviewed on ch 8, so meh. anyways, u have cursed us with these same 8 chapters? never to know ravens response when she finds out? whhats gonna happen to punck rocket? And gizmo and the cable! Please write! |
 grant117 9/19/10 . chapter 8Update! Please! |
 5x5shadow5 9/7/10 . chapter 8Wow i've read this from the first to last chapter and loved it please hurry and update. |
 darknessislight 6/18/10 . chapter 8i love this story. Its simple yet fun to read, and adding Gizmo into the mix just helped. Portraying Robin as a dickhead and overbearing ass was a bit much, but its your story and if I don't like the result I guess I will stop reading. |
 Hanyou Gunslinger 6/3/10 . chapter 8 Hey Fearless Ferret i lov this story. Its freakin awsome. Please update i have been waiting for you to update, but i understand if you dont have time with school and such to update. So please if you have time please update. |
 DemonChild6 2/17/10 . chapter 8Oh wow. I just love your story. Its fricking brilliant. Your writing style is so enticing that I can't stop reading. I even opened the story on my ipod touch while in class cause I couldn't stop reading.
I have a question though; what are Jinx's and Raven's height? Is Jinx bigger then Raven? Because shes like really skinny and small in the series, you know? Just wondering lol. Btw I'm really sorry about your losses. Its terrible to lose family members, I lost my grandpa not to long ago and I'm still getting over it. Love you and your story so please update when you can :] |