Mr. Paris is playing havoc with the holodeck. Yup

Great story! Can't wait to read the third in the trilogy!

very very very very good keep going on these fan-fiction-tastic stories

hehe.I like this one too.Keep it up.

I'm loving this! I wanted to save my review until after I read the third part, but I couldn't wait. You are doing a spectacular job!

Altair? Deneb? I may just be drawing connections where there aren't any (I do that often) but are you a fan of the Rowan? Feel no especial need to respond to that. I love your story though! :)

Have you made the sequel? Would love to read it if you can tell me where.

I remember reading this story on your site a long time ago. I didn't remember all of it, but it came back to me when I read this. And it's even better than I remember. Wonderful job, please continue. 0.

eyes light up I've been waiting for this! Bravo! I definitely like this!