This story is amazing! It is so good it inspired me to write my own story like this.

Oh... I agree with you! Taishakuten eating Ashura's body is such a horrying scene. He would go to the extremes for his lover...i beleive,,and it's so wrong for me to think that it's romantic...but i do. and thankx 4 the fiction! I just fin the manga yesterday. suspected that this pair had something going on and was pleasantly suprised when the revealed it in the last volume :)

loved the story. It was very sad...

Oh! This is a great fic -! I totally agreed with you. Poor Tai! But I like! I love this fic -! Write more! There aren't too much TaishakutenAshura-Ou fic in ff.net...and this one is the best I have seen so far!

it was a good fic, and i totally agree with u on the Taishakuten part. It WAS sad. I was kinda crying when i was reading the manga. Keep up with the good work!

dark and angst, but not nearly so as the original. I seriously think that all seven members of the CLAMP group are insane, but I guess that's what we all love them for. Just to let you know, in the original setting, Ashura inherited the throne as a very young child. I like your setting more though, their innocence was heart breaking, especially with the way you placed contrast to the scenes-joyful and sweet, and all of a sudden blood was spreading everywhere. I shivered. Write more of those great stories!

*eyes widen* Oh boy...I KNOW I'll be getting nightmares! Well, *trembles a bit* very...very...well, gruesome-like and clingy fic. Wow...