oh. :( that's sad... but it has a happy ending! they get together!

The light in his eyes vanished from Daphne's vision. He closed his eyes for a moment, and when he opened them, they were still dulled.

nothing wrong with that sentance, but is this from his POV? i think it is, except it changes to hers at the end, doesn't it? anyway, if that part of the fic is from his POV, he wouldn't be able to see that.

apart from that it's fine :)

Aww poor Daphne :)

Aww, poor Ian.

Poor Daphne. :(

But really good fic...I did not care much for Daphne's transformation, either.

That was really well done. A bit short, but good.

That was very well written. *applause* (haha) I'm glad they got back together though! :D

i loved it! you can't stop now add more!

AWESOME! I loved it! You portrayed the emotion perfectly, and I loved the way it was written. It really capture's Ian's point of view. I'm so glad someone else finally decided to post another fic for this movie (most of them aren't really that great, probably mine included lol). Please keep writing, you're really good! :)