Loved this chapter. I really hope you continue this and finish it one day! I've been reading this over and over again since last year.

It's actually not 'cute' but more like 'shy.' Or proper. That is the main girl most of the time. Like Aeris, Yuna, etc. The other type is the loud, athletic girl, like Rikku, or Penelo.

The main guy is usually a boy (14 or 15) who's overenthusiastic, and whose power grows, basically every video game main char ever. Another type is the loud showoff, like Balthier. Or the dark and brooding type, like Vincent or Auron.

please continue! there just arent enough vaashes out there that can compare to a day in the other life (i would write one myself but im useless!) your writing is very descriptive and sensual; this is the best vaan/ashe i have ever seen.

I have read this about 5 times and i still enjoy it but is it finished because you haven't updated in like a year?

Still love this story. Would ALSO love to see more of it. ^_^

I understand that it's been something like a year since you last published a chapter for this, but I do hope you continue this. I really enjoy it. It's written great, you portray human emotions fabulously and I love your writing style. Do hope you start this up again soon.

Ah, and I do have one little bit of criticism. This story seems to make Ashe a little too dependant, naive and helpless. In the game, she always appeared to be strong willed, intelligent, and independent. But I guess the change in personality is only to fit your story.

Honest, sweet, and straightforward, if somewhat slow--an excellent romance, and I really, really want to see the update.

I just noticed it's almost a year since you updated this story... I read all the chapters (again) and I would still like to read more. Plus I'm still waiting for the M-rated parts, lol. ^^;

This story is really good, one of the best, if not the best, for the Vaan/Ashe pairing (there are so few stories about them >

I had just came across this great story of yours and I was just wondering if are you going to continue this story??
If you will, I'm looking forward to it!
-It has greatly captured my heart.. and it gave me goosebumps!|
It's like--I can portray myself into ashe's position..
a great master piece!
good job on the story line^^
simply fascinating.
I would like to encourage you to continue this story. please do!!

WAH! You need to update soon! I'm dying from AshexVaan deprivation over here! *Cries in corner from mental weakness*

A really good story. Update soon

did you stop updating? i hope not, its a good story.

this is such a really good story... i really do love it and this pairing.. hope that you update soon cuz this story is the only ashe and vaan i really like. I perfer rated M stories. So please please please please update more frquently (sp??)

I really haven't read anything great in a while, minus this =]
I hope you update soon ^-^

I like it. It so sweet and innocent yet its somehow deeply romantic. A very intresting story. 5/5