Nice. You know Daniel's sorry and missing Vala, and this really shows it. Thanks so much for writing!

I love it! It's really good!

aww, cute story!

Beautiful, Cleo. Thank you for sharing.

MA

Sweet story. It feels true. What's DFR?

That was a superb response to the challenge. Poor Daniel. At least he will eventually get a chance to apologise. Loved the ref to Daniel's own bad times with Jack.

nice! haha 'Colonel Guardian-of-Time Carter'...I like that. but very well-written. :-)

so I don't know about you, but just totally filled my inbox. it appears the mail servers finally caught up. I always wanted more of a reaction than in Beachhead, and this is perfect. You do write jack and daniel interaction very well.

kay x

Beautiful! *sniff*

Lovely.

nice story!