It's ok with the updating thing. Lord knows I'm the worst at it.
Anyway, I like what you've got going here. Course, I've probably already stated that, but I will again. :D
So please update soon. :)

This is interesting. What interest do merpeople have in the Jacobs brothers...it seems like Whistler already has a history, will more of it be revealed in this story, or have you written something else I should check out first?

this is some crazy sh*t! still it is pretty cool. a little out there but i'm curious to read more.

Confusion... But this is interesting!! Keep writing!

Wow. So that only took about 20 tries to log in.
Well, now to my actual review.
GAREN! THIS IS AMAZING! I love this very very very very much. Oh how I have missed Whistler. And he has a kid now?! wtf? I've missed so much! :[ I love this though, I'm very excited to see you combining fantasy and newsies. We could really use the creativity around here. So really all I've got left to say is that this is amazing, and please update very soon.
Danke schön.♥

Wow. This is awesome! keep it up!
Sierra

Wow. Just wow.

You... I... um... Okay.

I like this length for the chapter. Also, the story is moving so well. I reread the previous chapters and just loved how the chapters flow together.

Oh! Mysteriousmysterioumysterious.
Please uodate soon!

Oh wow, I haven't been on here in a while. New story? And I didn't know about it! I like it...it's very interesting...just make sure you keep it in the realm of the believable, with which you're right now handling very, very well. ~Shelly

wow i really like it. *walks away*

Just Kidding! hahhaha. This is possibly the best Newsie fanfic i have come across as of yet. Not only because you indeed kept David in character not to mention you have quite a way with languages-but i love when people can take the two most unlikely things( mermaids and newspaper delivers) put them together and still have what most definetly can be called an interesting story.
p.s. why haven't you updated? if you don't hurry i might have to find some wooden cheese of my own to throw at you!

I like that you're drawing the reader in. It's not like a sudden immersion into an action packed story that leaves the reader wondering how it all began. I hope you’ll write more on the lives underwater. Especially on Allod, I’d love to see more of him.

Uh oh! I do not believe that this is good news. I wonder what they were talking about. It's either really good (doubtfull) or really bad (most likely). Please update soon!

Ugh...cliff hangers...got to love them. Anyways...great chapter, if short, but great none the less.

Skarsgaard/Labyrinth

Nice chapter. I love the dialogue, don't know why, I just really like the way it flows between Whistler and David, and Airge and Allod. Something about the words you use add to the beautiful effect. Anyways, nothing more to say, please keep writing.