Hurry up in making the sequel please! Y-know, I would think that you should maybe work on finishing stories faster by focusing on one or two, and not start a new one until you have finished most o the others.

By the way, I would love to pop up and kill that badger (sighs while imagining the many ways of killing the hated badger). I agree, a stink or a moat would be to fluffy ,and, well strange. Finish the other fics you have, then work on a sequel please! Now to la-la land and it's many killing badgers ways *u*.

DIE YOU ACURRSED BADGER!

this was awesome you rock!

Okay, so I actually finished reading 15 like six months ago, but I apparently forgot to review. Silly, no?

Yeah, not really.

Well anyways, not a bad ending, but towards the latter chapters the pacing seemed a bit inconsistent, the battle scenes were quick, but broken up by a bit too much dialogue. It also tended to be a bit of standard action movie: we have a villian monologue (complete with "oh snap, I just wasted my own damn time and apparently my life as well *gurgle*" no offense intended but the explaination for the death was just...i dunno, revisionist feeling) and the secluded showdown which, while great from a cinematography (or wahtever the literary equivalent would be) standpoint, it is a bit silly from a logical standpoint.

I have to say I agree with a few of your other reviewers whom has expressed their dismay at the actions of the hares and badger in particular. The hares, particualarly those who knew, seemed awfully silent for too much, it would have been nice to see a voice, if only a meek one. As for the badger, well, I'm assuming that he's young, headstrong and naive, but the story leads me to believe that he's simply irrational. A bit more depth would have been nice.

Anyways, overall you've had a nice fic and I look forward to seeing you improve upon future prjects (which I ought to go read now, eh?). G'luck ya lil' psycho...er, wolf.

-Avel

From start to finish, this is one incredible fic. Proof indeed that vermin rock the house! XD

I think it would be great if the Shadowtide helped the new Badger Lord...make him eat his words. HA! Revenge is sweet, non?

I like your writing style! And I have one word: DEMAIN! Mon dieu! XD

Your story is so wonderful.
I just don't like the way you potray the hares. The hares seemed so boring and awful.(T_T Hares are one of my favourite characters)
And I hate the Badger Lord he seems so unreasonable(but I think having an unreasonable Badger Lord with bloodwrath is quite normal)
Its just that...poor Kan and Sakhyo. They tried so hard and all they get is a stern warning and kicked out of the mountain.
But I'm very into your story. I'll be waiting for more. ^^

~Foxie

Yay! Great story! Rakh is stupid! Good luck on the sequel! I'm writing in choppy sentences on purpose!

I can't wait for a sequel!

*sighs* there is no rest for the weary. Oh, and good for you, I rather dislike cross-species shipping. :D

BWA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!

YOU DID IT! YOU FINISHED IT! YAY! YAY! YAY! *WAHOO*!

THREE CHEERS!

HIP-HIP, HOORAY!

HIP-HIP, HOORAY!

HIP-HIP-HIP-HIP (sorry but I think it's funny) HOORAY!

Sigh. I hate that badger lord, I hope he dies. A horrible, gruesome death; that's what I like about writing; you can have whatever happen to anyone you do or don't like.

I hope some of the long patrol hares rebel against the badger lord; he's such a *^*%$#$%@#$%%&*%$#@@!@$#$#^#%$%^&$$#$%^$%^&$^%#^$%^$%&$%^#%$^$%&%$%&%&*^%$#%^#$%^$%&%^&*&*&(%$$%^#$%#@%^$%^&^$#$%^%$^&%%^&*^&%*^&*%^&%%^$%#@ (pauses to take a breath) %$^&*^&*$%#$%^#$$&^*^&%^$$##$@^&%^$%#^&%&^&*^&%^&%%^$%^$%$##@#%%^&%^%*(&&*^&^%&%^%##$%%^&%^*&*&^#%##*^^&#$%^$%^&^%&*^$%^$%^&%$^&*%^*%^&%^$%^&^%*!

Ahem. Well, anyway.

AW, that's so nice! What you said about me! Although don't feel ashamed about the corsair calling his captain "ma'am"; actually, now that I think about it, if you play your cards right, you could use that in a humor fic. But whatever.

Kan + Sakhyo?! EW! Gross! Even *I* think that's disgusting, and I *like* cross-species pairings (if its a rat/mouse or weasel/ferret or fox/wolf thing, with an occasional otter/fox, but it HAS to be well-done, and not crappy. So yeah).

Yes, I enjoyed this fic! You're a better writer than I am.

Oh yeah, I *tried* to open my messages to you, but it *still* tells me that its having trouble getting the server! AUGH! Sigh. Well, I'll keep trying. Don't you worry!

Well, bye! I'll PM you as soon as I get those messages! I promise!

You put me to shame. You're awesome. But did Raeyari have to die? I hate it when a character dies and you hardly know him/her. Not that I'm saying anything bad, but...I kinda liked her.

*falls through the floor*

WOW.

...

That's just... WOW...

Gory...

Why did you have Merrond act so merciless, though? That doesn't seem quite right, the way how Drift died. Of course it played into how Kan reacted and such.

Why did Razorclaw kill Arif? Hmph. Maybe just because he's crazy. Who knows? You can never tell with warlords. Maybe he had wanted to kill his brother and was furious with Arif for beating him to the punch.

This was a *great* chapter. Poor Kan. Aw well. At least he and Sakhyo didn't die; that would've been a *real* tragedy.

Say, in the next chapter, is there going to be a... (glances around at the other reveiwers and then adds in a whisper)... badger lord?

Sigh... in chapter 14, you said "His powers of speech came back to him" or something like that when Kan finally got his voice back when Arif was standing over him; I think you should change that to "Kan's powers of speech..." so that people will get it quicker that its Kan you're talking about.

But WOW. Now thats a gruesome way to fight a warlord! And an equally gruesome way for a warlord to die. (mock shivers)

Argh. I sure hope chapter 16 won't take long.

Well, keep up the good work, and I'll *try* to answer you messages! Okay, see you later!

Sequel? There's going to be a SEQUEL?
Yippee!
Good job with both chapters. I'm sorry for not reviewing earlier;I had not realized that 14 was up yet!
I never trusted Arif. I really didn't. But his tale was quite...reality-like...and only the Martin knew. And she was mute.
I can't wait for the next one!!

wow. I don't know a single part of this that could be called choppy.

I agree with that Barkflow-of-Riverclan, your vermin speech is really good. i cant wait for ch 14.