Wow! What a great idea. You did good with the writing too! I loved it. Write more soon!
-Kinkosami

_ I liked this! It's a really good take on a traditional story!

Katana-sama

Coolish! I'm Jewish, but that was very good! I think I heard of this scene somewhere before, but like I said, I'm not Christian or anything. Molto bravissimo (I'm not Italian either _)

Wow! This is terrific! :) I just luv it! You did an excellent re-telling of this Biblical story! I've hardly ever found any writers on FF.net who write religious stories, so I'm pretty excited

I followed your link here and found tis story. Really beautifully written. I could always picture exactly what was going on. Nice POV of the gospel.

Jaid, I thought this was a great story! I like the perspective you took with the children, putting a spin on the miracle of feeding the 5,000 story. The dialogue works well, and I like the description. The line that goes something like, "I became a part of the crowd instead of observing it," stood out to me.

What I most like about this story is that it is about Jesus-the Master!

Kinda sounds likea Bible story I have read...hummm.. *hint hint* : )

LOVED IT! I'm a Jesus Freak, myself, and this was a neat way to put one of the best mericles of the Bible into a fanfic! Great Job!

wow, that's a completely different view on the whole story of bread and fish. I'm not Christian, more like agnostic or diest, but it's really a unique point of view on the whole traditional story.

It's awesome!

That was such a good story. I realy liked it! I think everyone should read it.

Awesome!