Damn the ending to that was brilliant! I'd actually forgotten about this fic until it I got the email, had to reread the last chapter, which got me right back in the mood... Such a good ending! Brava!

Whens the next story coming out? :D

I hope your hand is feeling better now too, that must have really sucked *hug*

Tahra

You finished it! Yay! When I got the email alert for the chapter, I got all excited :-). Great chapter and ending. Nice way to leave it open for more (nudge, nudge).

I linked to this story from lj and got to read the whole thing from beginning to end. I liked this story very much. It was an excellent "next week's episode" story with a clever plot, interesting characters, creepy and suspenseful moments and some nice twists and turns. Tabitha's special ability was intriguing. I liked that you took the trouble to flesh out how her ability worked rather than just leaving it at "she kills you in your dreams." Your explanation made it seem more fully realized and plausible. My favorite thing about the story, however, was the way you wrote the boys. The tensions between them at this point in the series were well realized. Dean's fears about Sam and his anger and frustration dealing with the burden his father laid on him came across loud and clear. As did Sam's frustration with Dean's evasiveness and unwillingness to talk to Sam about what was bothering him. But Dean's belief in Sam and their love and dependence on each other came through as well in simple and subtle ways. The dialog was excellent throughout. If I have one quibble, it is with the placement of the adverbs in the dialog. You put the adverb before the verb, which is not incorrect but is not standard practice and just seems a bit awkward. For example, "he cut in angrily" sounds a little more natural to me than "he angrily cut in." This may just be a personal prejudice on my part, so feel free to ignore me. At any rate, it is a very minor quibble. On the whole I thought you captured the cadences of Dean's and Sam's speech, as well as their emotions and reactions, extremely well. Sorry to be so wordy, but when I read something I enjoy this much, I feel I ought to let the author know not only that I liked it but why it worked for me. Any chance that the little tease at the end might portend a sequel?

Oh, wow... I just read all 8 chapters, and I've really enjoyed this. It's so good, and just like watching an actual episode. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

Tahra

Great chapter. Had me on the edge of my seat. I love the concept of Tabitha's dream power. Very cool.

This reads like one of the better episodes. That's one freaky power that Tabitha has. I am totally not understanding the lack of reviews. Very cool. Totally going on my alerts.

This is a very intriguing story. I like your Sam and Dean characterization. Can't wait to read more!

Great story! Really looking forward to more. I love the banter between the brothers. Dead on to them! Hurry back!

It is a very cool story. Like it very much. Please continue soon!