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Anonymous
2009-04-30 . chapter 23
You captured the essence of the characters beautifully and included just the right amount of humor, tension and conflict. Should this story be made into a cartoon, it would equal Beavis&Butthead Do America in quality.
I love it how you wrote a happy ending and showed SOME positive change in at least Beavis if not Butthead. Also, the escapades on their roadtrip where loads of fun.
I wonder if I could talk you into writing some Runeswords fanfiction. If it's any help, it's an awesome series of sword&sorcery, its first book having been written by Clayton Emery.
Amber-Artist
2009-02-15 . chapter 18
Man, this story is too damn GOOD! I haven't finished yet, but is very fun and in-character. Great job!
JaredMilne1982
2008-11-04 . chapter 1
Absolutely brilliant. You nail down the characters perfectly, from Beavis and Butt-head down to Stewart and Daria and just about everyone else. You would have made a fantastic writer for the show-you give some major depth to characters who only appeared once or twice.

If I were to make any suggestion at all, it would be to pair Beavis up with Quinn and Butt-head up with Kimberly. Our heroes deserve to score with some really hot chicks after everything they've been through.

Oh, and nice job with what you did with Todd. I never liked him on the show, and I loved seeing him get what he deserved. He and Harry make a lovely couple.
Freebird87
2008-07-14 . chapter 23
This is great.
Freebird87
2008-07-14 . chapter 22
McVicker kicks arse.
Freebird87
2008-07-14 . chapter 15
Love the cameo of Mr. Candy.
Drucilla Black
2008-06-18 . chapter 23
Wow...I'm kinda bummed that it's over, but the whole story is just terrific from begining to end. I can't wait for you to write some more B&B fics :-)
Mr. Gopher
2008-06-18 . chapter 23
You want my advice, send this fic to Mike Judge. Maybe we can get another Beavis and Butt-head movie out of it.
KingdomKey23
2008-06-17 . chapter 23
Aw, so it ends. Loved the story, dude. The epilogue was good, though I felt the part where McVicker and Quinn chased the duo was a bit dragged on, but it was still great. I loved the part when the duo once again caused trouble for Mr. Anderson. And you know, regardless of the changes that will occur in life, Beavis and Butt-Head will continue to be themselves. You just can't change who they are, and you did a great job at doing that. Again, you really captured the true essence of the show, only you rolled it up into one big adventure.

However, let me fill in one of those open-ended questions of your's: knowing their luck, Beavis and Butt-Head still never scored. XD

Overall, this story was awesome, and I hope you write some more Beavis and Butt-Head fics. (I did notice you plan to do a parody featuring them, so I'll keep my eyes peeled) Keep on writing!

KingdomKey23
Simply Crisis
2008-05-29 . chapter 22
Though I am a bit sad that this fic is going to end I gotta say awesome work on it man one of I utmost favorite Beavis and Butt head fanfics out there. Can't wait for the epiloge to see what the out come is. Then maybe just for the hell of it I'll read it again. Just that good. :)
KingdomKey23
2008-05-26 . chapter 22
Awesome chapter, man! As Butt-Head would say, "It kicked **!" The final fight scene was action packed, and the way Buzzcut tricked the bad guys was clever. Glad to see everything turned out great in the end, epscially with Todd finally getting what so rightfully deserves. Loved all the humor in the chapter, too. Another fine chapter. Shame this story is almost done, but all good things must come to an end. See ya later.

KingdomKey23
Mr. Gopher
2008-05-26 . chapter 22
Very good chapter, so Beavis and Butt-head are going to be stars on Broadway, unexpected but welcomed. Please update the final chapter soon.
Drucilla Black
2008-05-26 . chapter 22
Wow, what a fantastic story you've written. I can't believe it's almost over now :-(. I really hope you plan to write more B&B fics in the future...you really know how to evolve them but keep them perfectly in character at the same time.
Mr. Gopher
2008-04-22 . chapter 21
McVicker helping Beavis and Butt-head! I ever thought I'd see such a sight.
Drucilla Black
2008-04-21 . chapter 21
What a great chapter, can't wait for the next one :-)
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