Nice plot beginning. Well written. In short, very promising.

This was so beautiful! I loved how sweet and intimate their relationship is all until Seto is ripped away from Yami like that! How unfair, is Yami going to fix it? When are you updating this? it looks like you haven't touched it in a while but it says that its not a complete story.

Looking for your next update!
-LP

This is really interesting, can't wait to hear what happens next.

aw! poor seth! i feel sorry for him.

I'm eager to read the rest. I usually never follow along with incomplete works, but I'm far to interested in this fanfiction. Hope to see an update soon.

I've added your story to my alert list too, by the way.