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kimborliee
2008-01-16 . chapter 7
omg no way!! i thought there'd be an epilogue! lol it's too good to end! lol i want more CagalliXAthrun! lol this was really sweet and i loved it so it's okay if u dun make an epilogue, but i do hope u take that into consideraion ^^!
cottongreentea
2008-01-16 . chapter 7
WOW! OMG! That was such a good ending! *tears tears* It was so BEAUTIFUL!
shiloah18
2008-01-13 . chapter 7
bLeEp? isn't it supposed to be "beep"? ^^

words that are diFferent from each other:
"of" and "oFf"
"where" and "were"
"knew" and "new"
"want" and "went"
"whether" and "weather"

"an" is onLy used when the beginning of the word after it is a voweL.. ^-^

Ooh.. the finaLe.. ^_^

try using "'s" for ownership next time Like.. the Knight's father.. :)

does the wedding gown beLong to the Knight's okaa-san? :>

what a cheat! XC

nightmare..

first finger? d'you mean the index finger?

third finger? you mean the ring finger, ne?

"knew" is past tense and "know" is present.. :'>

aww.. the ring and the Haumea amuLet.. ^.~

hmm.. Athrun on the fLoOr Leaning in to Cags for a kiSs? that must've bEen a bit ** his part.. it wouLd've bEen easier if he was on top of her.. XD

lol just Like what I was reviewing.. XD

Hibiki..

medicaL oFfice? can't it be caLLed cLinic for short.. *sighs* nvm.. -_-

nyWeiZ, this is done and gOod.. ^ ^ though I think it's a bit rushed.. nah.. that's just me.. XD suteki deshou! jaa ne in your other fix! ;3
cagalliyulathha
2008-01-13 . chapter 7
AW...I meant...AW... nevermind -_-".
Such a sweet ending ^^ sheez what a lot of coincidences in the fic XD I loved it and hope for more like this from your hand!
AsuCaga01
2008-01-13 . chapter 7
Nice ending...Yeepee!^_^
CagalliRules
2008-01-13 . chapter 7
Great!! :)
PinkPrincess511
2008-01-12 . chapter 7
Really good!! thanks for completing it!!
lovecagali
2008-01-12 . chapter 7
i love your story. the end is so cute ^^
Mage666
2007-11-29 . chapter 6
They are really getting close now!! I think that date was set up a bit by the others lol!! Keep up the god work, Mage6
shiloah18
2007-11-29 . chapter 6
Athha.. Hibiki.. Mu.. Seiran..

this whoLe pLay is not aLL pretend, ne? lol not aLL pretend.. a fic by SeungLee.. ^^

they've onLy got a cLaSs or two a day?! -_^

nyWeiZ, oh weLL.. *sighs* Let Cags win with instant ramen.. *shrugs* suteki chap! jaa ne in your next one! ;3
cottongreentea
2007-10-15 . chapter 5
I love this chapter! Finally a story that doesn't have Athrun leaving for the sake of Cagalli. I think those are so boring. Yours is the best!
shiloah18
2007-10-11 . chapter 5
ULen Hibiki.. Caridad.. Amarfi.. MigueL.. Za BurreL..

CagaLLi YuLa Athha.. why ALex Athrun ZaLa? why not Athrun ALex ZaLa? ne? -_^

Sukura eh? the way Lacus' Jap name is pronounced is Rakusu.. you had it backwards, ne? suteki! ^^ demo, you couLd've changed the "u" in "Su" into "a" and have it Sakura instead.. *sighs* oh weLL.. this is your fic.. *shrugs*

Akira eh? if I'm not mistaken.. both Akira and Kira means kiLLer.. if I'm not mistaken.. that is..

didn't Athrun wonder why his surname was the same as the Knight's surname? I mean.. they're both ZaLas!

lol CagaLLi forcing Athrun to Let her heLp him eh? AsuCaga scene! XD

ALex eh? for some reason.. I was thinking that the hime-sama's name wouLd be YuLa.. yeah.. CagaLLi's second name.. *shrugs* oh weLL..

“Alex don’t LOose hope yet you stiLL have a second chance to taLk to him so don’t give up so easiLy” just Like what she said in GS eh? ^^

yup Cags... Athrun's starting to sound Like the Knight in the story..

haven't they read the boOk? how come they're wondering what wouLd happen next? ~_^

nyWeiZ, suteki fic! taLk about being reincarnations of the past Lovers.. I mean.. this is AU.. whiLe the story is taLking about the SEED universe.. lol something Like that.. ^_^ and it's kinda Like "Fushigi Yugi".. they met again.. though in a diFferent universe..

I wonder if there'd be a scene wherein the spirit of either the Knight or the hime-sama wouLd go into either the bodies of AsuCaga.. y'know.. making them OOC.. Like Athrun being posSeSsed by the spirit of ALex and taLking aLL funny stuFf which Cags doesn't understand.. oLd engLish I guesS.. or the spirit of CagaLLi taLks to Cags in one of her dreams.. yeah.. some stuFf Like those..

jaa ne in your next update! ;3
totalanimelover
2007-08-27 . chapter 4
It's Ahmed, right? Right?!

Update soon! ^^
cottongreentea
2007-08-13 . chapter 4
DUDE! First i thought it would be Heine...But nope... I think i noe!... It's AHMED! UGH! ... I had to re-read the whole story cause i got confused about the fairy tale and their relationship with ASUCAGA! LOL! But... I LOVE DIS FIC! UPDATE ASAP!
neji447
2007-08-12 . chapter 4
ah!i wanna know who is that!i hope u will update really really soon!sry for late reviews got school work to do
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