 kimborliee 2008-01-16 . chapter 7omg no way!! i thought there'd be an epilogue! lol it's too good to end! lol i want more CagalliXAthrun! lol this was really sweet and i loved it so it's okay if u dun make an epilogue, but i do hope u take that into consideraion ^^! |
 cottongreentea 2008-01-16 . chapter 7WOW! OMG! That was such a good ending! *tears tears* It was so BEAUTIFUL! |
 shiloah18 2008-01-13 . chapter 7bLeEp? isn't it supposed to be "beep"? ^^
words that are diFferent from each other:
"of" and "oFf"
"where" and "were"
"knew" and "new"
"want" and "went"
"whether" and "weather"
"an" is onLy used when the beginning of the word after it is a voweL.. ^-^
Ooh.. the finaLe.. ^_^
try using "'s" for ownership next time Like.. the Knight's father.. :)
does the wedding gown beLong to the Knight's okaa-san? :>
what a cheat! XC
nightmare..
first finger? d'you mean the index finger?
third finger? you mean the ring finger, ne?
"knew" is past tense and "know" is present.. :'>
aww.. the ring and the Haumea amuLet.. ^.~
hmm.. Athrun on the fLoOr Leaning in to Cags for a kiSs? that must've bEen a bit ** his part.. it wouLd've bEen easier if he was on top of her.. XD
lol just Like what I was reviewing.. XD
Hibiki..
medicaL oFfice? can't it be caLLed cLinic for short.. *sighs* nvm.. -_-
nyWeiZ, this is done and gOod.. ^ ^ though I think it's a bit rushed.. nah.. that's just me.. XD suteki deshou! jaa ne in your other fix! ;3 |
 cagalliyulathha 2008-01-13 . chapter 7AW...I meant...AW... nevermind -_-".
Such a sweet ending ^^ sheez what a lot of coincidences in the fic XD I loved it and hope for more like this from your hand! |
 AsuCaga01 2008-01-13 . chapter 7Nice ending...Yeepee!^_^ |
 CagalliRules 2008-01-13 . chapter 7Great!! :) |
 PinkPrincess511 2008-01-12 . chapter 7Really good!! thanks for completing it!! |
 lovecagali 2008-01-12 . chapter 7 i love your story. the end is so cute ^^ |
 Mage666 2007-11-29 . chapter 6They are really getting close now!! I think that date was set up a bit by the others lol!! Keep up the god work, Mage6 |
 shiloah18 2007-11-29 . chapter 6Athha.. Hibiki.. Mu.. Seiran..
this whoLe pLay is not aLL pretend, ne? lol not aLL pretend.. a fic by SeungLee.. ^^
they've onLy got a cLaSs or two a day?! -_^
nyWeiZ, oh weLL.. *sighs* Let Cags win with instant ramen.. *shrugs* suteki chap! jaa ne in your next one! ;3 |
 cottongreentea 2007-10-15 . chapter 5I love this chapter! Finally a story that doesn't have Athrun leaving for the sake of Cagalli. I think those are so boring. Yours is the best! |
 shiloah18 2007-10-11 . chapter 5ULen Hibiki.. Caridad.. Amarfi.. MigueL.. Za BurreL..
CagaLLi YuLa Athha.. why ALex Athrun ZaLa? why not Athrun ALex ZaLa? ne? -_^
Sukura eh? the way Lacus' Jap name is pronounced is Rakusu.. you had it backwards, ne? suteki! ^^ demo, you couLd've changed the "u" in "Su" into "a" and have it Sakura instead.. *sighs* oh weLL.. this is your fic.. *shrugs*
Akira eh? if I'm not mistaken.. both Akira and Kira means kiLLer.. if I'm not mistaken.. that is..
didn't Athrun wonder why his surname was the same as the Knight's surname? I mean.. they're both ZaLas!
lol CagaLLi forcing Athrun to Let her heLp him eh? AsuCaga scene! XD
ALex eh? for some reason.. I was thinking that the hime-sama's name wouLd be YuLa.. yeah.. CagaLLi's second name.. *shrugs* oh weLL..
“Alex don’t LOose hope yet you stiLL have a second chance to taLk to him so don’t give up so easiLy” just Like what she said in GS eh? ^^
yup Cags... Athrun's starting to sound Like the Knight in the story..
haven't they read the boOk? how come they're wondering what wouLd happen next? ~_^
nyWeiZ, suteki fic! taLk about being reincarnations of the past Lovers.. I mean.. this is AU.. whiLe the story is taLking about the SEED universe.. lol something Like that.. ^_^ and it's kinda Like "Fushigi Yugi".. they met again.. though in a diFferent universe..
I wonder if there'd be a scene wherein the spirit of either the Knight or the hime-sama wouLd go into either the bodies of AsuCaga.. y'know.. making them OOC.. Like Athrun being posSeSsed by the spirit of ALex and taLking aLL funny stuFf which Cags doesn't understand.. oLd engLish I guesS.. or the spirit of CagaLLi taLks to Cags in one of her dreams.. yeah.. some stuFf Like those..
jaa ne in your next update! ;3 |
 totalanimelover 2007-08-27 . chapter 4It's Ahmed, right? Right?!
Update soon! ^^ |
 cottongreentea 2007-08-13 . chapter 4DUDE! First i thought it would be Heine...But nope... I think i noe!... It's AHMED! UGH! ... I had to re-read the whole story cause i got confused about the fairy tale and their relationship with ASUCAGA! LOL! But... I LOVE DIS FIC! UPDATE ASAP! |
 neji447 2007-08-12 . chapter 4ah!i wanna know who is that!i hope u will update really really soon!sry for late reviews got school work to do |