 Nahtan 2009-11-05 . chapter 4 This deserves to be published. |
 Fox445 2008-02-11 . chapter 5Woo, sweet chapter :D. I can't help but wonder what Toresule will turn into. Are you going to explain how Lyndia survived in the next chapter? Or will they continue to battle after she shows him whatever it is in that cave? So many other questions and I hope that they'll all be answered in the next chapter! Keep it up ^-^ |
 Fox445 2007-10-16 . chapter 4I like the introduction of family in this chapter. I also like the peek into Wushan's past ^-^. Making it an Amy/Wushan? Hm, that sounds like a plan to me but I don't think she should immediately fall in love with him not that I think you would do that. Perhaps Sonic could get a tad jealous lol? I can't wait to read what happens between Wushan and his sister :D. On a side note, I noticed this isn't getting a lot of reviews which sucks because the plot your using is completely original! I'll try and spread this story around ^-^. Anyway, can't wait until the next chapter. |
 Fox445 2007-09-09 . chapter 3Yes, a very interesting twist. I especially like the cliff-hanger at the end. I can't wait to read what comes next. Keep it up! |
 Fox445 2007-05-10 . chapter 2Fantastic. It doesn't seem that many people are reviewing on this, which is a shame to say the least. Anyways, great chapter and I hope you keep it up. |
 Fox445 2007-04-03 . chapter 1Very interesting, but one comes to wonder why it was put under the Blaze romance section? Anyways, this a great action packes chapter and I hope to see more. |