There's a problem with this chapter. What ever this is, it's not Duel Spirit Insanity.

Not a bad story. Would of loved to see Jim face Amon.

Yes, YES!

Super hilarious lines, and a good amount of strategy. Good idea.

Could Bastion see duel spirits too? I'd like that to happen. But I love Aster's reaction to seeing the Neo-Spacians. But in the second season Aster does get the ablity to see duel spirits and has his own duel spirit, Destiny Hero-Doom Lord. Just letting you know.

Chapter 1 was so funny! How does jaden get mad? It's impossible for him to get mad, let alon let a vien POP OUT OF HIS HEAD! Johan got so mad. I would 2 though. GO YU-GI-OH1 GX!

Hey I luv ur fic. It's da reason y I made my account in da first place. Isn't Johan's dub name Jesse? I'm just telling u in case u wanna change his name.

"aliens"

XDD

that's funny, but it does have some work that needs to be done: only one person may speak in a paragraph for instance

OMG! I was laughing so hard on the first chapter I was crying! Update soon. I love this! It's actually hilarious!

The concept is definitely interesting - I've never thought of it before, that's for sure.

And it's not just a sudden "okay everyone can see duel spirits now!" change, it's a more gradual change, which is the way to do it.

It has a mix of humor in it, too, which never hurts. I half-lol'd at the whole "Sartorius is being tried for stuff he did when possessed!" thing, especially. It's the brand of crack GX is known for having... sometimes.

And wow, you have quite a bit of content in each chapter - an unusual amount, actually, because rarely do writers ever go over, like, 20-30 words per individual chapter. More than I could muster per chapter, anyway, so you've definitely impressed me when it comes to chapter length.

I noticed a few errors, but not many. Still, it wouldn't hurt to read over your chapter after it's finished and before putting it up.

Still, this is quite good, actually. Aside from a few mechanical errors, there's no real characterization errors or anything (and if there are, it's probably in the name of humor, as I noticed that does happen every now and then).

Yay.

Mmkay, well, will be watching!

(And yes, I imagine Jaden's head IS quite roomy. XD)

Like the story, but could you not bash my favorite character Bastion. Other than that I like your story.

I liked it. It was good...but it was a little confusing with the duel. but keep going.