=( My name is Brianna.

kawaii!! graphic and i hate brianna but kawaii!

Awesome. I loved this story, very true to Ed and Roy what their relationship would be like. I like the way you used the song lyrics for scene breaks. It was nice to see a song incorporated into a story without overwhelming it. I also loved how at the very end Roy kept finishing Ed's sentences or reading his mind.

just a coupld grammar/spelling mistakes here or there, and occasionally I think you kind of talked in circles, but it was very good. In character, with Ed "not caring" but being so emotional...loved it. Faved.

Oh, btw, this is Lady Jibril's (Moonlight and Motorcycles) alternate profile. Just to let you know. :)

Incredible! Perfect! Amazing! Fluffy at the end! Heart-breaking at the beginning! YAY!!

Wonderful! ^^ You rock!

Loved your story. Very angsty. Well written. Made me care. And, yes, at the end I realized Ed cared and that he was the girl in the relationship...sorry edo.

wonderful story! i adored ed in this (and yes he is cuter as the 'girl') *grins* Only 2 things 1. to me the story and the song dont mesh well, the scenario wasn't the same so i'm not sure y u picked that particular song and 2. (and MUCH more importantly) why lime and not lemon?! *cries* they were so close, all roy had to do was 'slip it in' if u know what i mean LOL

MEP! That was friggin' awsome! If you haven't already guessed, I'm a edoXroi-sama yaoi fangirl as well... it's not ev'ry day ya' come across a story as good as this! And there was no spelling/grammar mistakes either!
Anyways... If i was Edo-chan, I woulda broken that ladys' face if she had even BREATHED on me, I woulda been that pissed... but, uh, Edo's mine, just FYI. I claimed him. I had first dibs. NO touchie. You touchie, you die.

Ack, I really need to come up with a better response than 'nice' or 'sweet'.
Um, how 'bout I liked it.

RoyxEd bored me because it's so traditional here at But you made it your own. You made everything seem so real, the emotions raw, the interactions interesting, exciting and useful. This one-shot was awesome. Addiong it to my fave story list.

i liked the lemon but why do u have to use the name 'brianna' that's my middle name! i don't want some hag to have it! ugh! lol

OMFG I loved it very kwel this woul make a good multiple chapter storie...maybe a lil change in the plot.But still indeed loved it!

-dances with u to La Vie Bohem- XD

-Trista

This was so beautiful!
Seriously
Going into favorites.
And I love you for writing it, basically.

WOW. that was long, awesome, super, lovely, sad, happy, emo, exciting, HOTT, great, sexy, beautiful, cute, and even wonderful.

good job. it was a totally graet fic to read (see upper portion of comment) and i just luv all of ur work. keep it up!
love, emily rose

The story rocked