Reviews for Return to the Unfamiliar Past

Reviews For: Return to the Unfamiliar Past

brownie945 2008-05-11 ch 6,	abusePlease continue...make a sequel to this sequel...i guess thats one way to say it. Anyway! PLEASE CONTINUE! continues to beg
As if he never existed 2008-03-22 ch 6,	abusewell, doesn't that suck for her?
iloveriddle 2007-08-17 ch 6,	abuseHey! I really like both of your stories. They are really good. Your ideas are good. You should definitely continue. I am so looking forward to it. You know just when to cut. What a big cliffie. So how come Velkan is there? Hahaha. He's really hot. Bye! really hope you continue soon.
Kairi's-twin 2007-06-05 ch 6,	abuseWhat that's Velkan just shows up and that's the end? * huffs* I likethe back and forth thing with Van Helsing Carl and erika at the end... Especially the part with "'and you are supposed to be an angel?' VanH 'Human habits I suppose.'" lol that was really funny. You HAVE TO WRITE MORE! theses stories are awesome!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE? puppydog eyeslol Any who later till next time ~Kairi's Twin~
Kairi's-twin 2007-06-04 ch 5,	abuseMan... so much happens in this chapter... this is going to be a LONG ONE! Dracula is such a liar! he said he didn't know what Von Trappe wanted Frankinstine for. What happens to Frankestien after that happened? Is he dead? PLEASE SAY HE'S NOT DEAD FRANKY IS SO COOL! God Damn Vampires always forcing people to drink their blood! Von Trappe really kind of creeped me out. Why was he so concerened about Erika when she was bitten? I'm kind of mad... you brought Drac back for what like not even 2 minutes and you killed him AGAIN! I am kind of glad Anastasia dies... she was a real **. I agree with Erika 'what is it with vampires and always having to have a bride?' That is a very good question... one I would like answered... Maybe I will find Dracula and ask him... O wait he's dead...never mind I will go ask Septimus... maybe he knows the answer. Seprimus was pretty cool but, thwere is like next to no character development for him thus far. Strange that Van turned out to be Velkan... but I thought Van said he remebered his name? Strange I always thought Silver Nitrate would kill a werewolf. But meh...it's your story isn't it? Tho whole thing with how after Erika drinks Von Trappe's blood she has to do what he says not matter what is kinda creepy. Not even Dracula's brides had to endure that, they atleast could agrue and disobey had they ever actually wanted to... which of course they wouldn't but atleast the option was still there. In Erika's Dreams Dracula is pretty annoying, yet that was probably his intention so whatever. Wait! So what did happen to Van? is he dead? did Dracula kill him? did he manage to get away? What happened? Sucks for Erika in this chapter. first she's a werewolf, then she's not a werewolf, then she's a werewolf again, nad then finally not a werewolf... and of course all of these transformations are accompanied by extreme pain. Carl: she sounds closer. lol you just have to love Carl! I am so glad that Erika and Derek end up together in the end!! This chapter was AWESOMLY ACTION PACKED!! AND I LOVED IT... except for the fact that Dracula was only back for like 20 minutes at the most and then was killed again! ~Kairi's Twin~
Kairi's-twin 2007-06-02 ch 1,	abuseYES YOU FINALLY MADE A SEQUAL!! I LOVE YOU FOR THAT! that hallucination thing i n the gym when Erica was danceing with Eric was weird. WHAT HAPPENED TO GABRIEL!? Is Dracula in this story again? I'm guessing he is since he is mentioned twice so far.Carl is so awesome I love him! ~KAIRI'S TWIN~
HughJackmanFan 2007-03-26 ch 6,	abuseWow! good story, I like it! I think, this story is complete`, or?? "Velkan" ? in the past? eyelight, she can to see again? finally you are alive, and I hope next once time the chapter...
HughJackmanFan 2007-03-08 ch 3,	abusehm, not bad and hope next chapter...

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