This was really, really good. i liked the way you described the way he couldn't fell anything, but it was a bit short and I would have appereciated some more bout what had been hapening before. update soon.
Luv ya!
~Emma

PLEASE UPDATE!
LEO!
LUV YOUR STORY!

NO!
That film is so depressing... you cant do that to Leo!
As much as I love the Metallica song, the thing is really angsty... but I cant help wanting to know what comes next.
Ok... cant really imagen Leo going nuts... I'll just wait and see

I'm officially intrgued. Though I don't think I have a clue what this is based on I'm really interested to read more.

that was a really good opening...I think though if you were to make it into an even longer story it would be even greater..again really good you got me totally hooked.

Hello. I've sent you an review already. Question: you are the best kid tmnt writer I've read. I was wondering if you could help me with one of my own tot story of the guys. Raising your younger siblings is diffrent from the full consept of children. So in other words...Please help the novice dude!
Thank you. Nikalian ^-^

Blink. o-kay. i'm lost. but i could see it all.

A very interesting beginning. You've certainly got me hooked.

Update alerted!

Wow very interesting...I wonder whats happening with Leo..this is interesting, very, very interesting.
Maybe it has something to do with the movie...I wonder now- does it?
This one has certainly caught my attention though.

Good job and update soon!

Metallica's "One" came to mind, but the prologue title made me think of that Simon and Garfunkle song too. :p

This is really intriguing. Definitely gonna check back for more. I hope things aren't too bad for Leo...

So far I like it. It has peaked my interest, please update soon!

Oh no you didn't.

You did NOT start another chapter fic while your brilliant story "In Another's Shoes" remains unfinished. Do you enjoy tormenting your loyal fans? Do you take some perverse pleasure in leaving us hanging for months on end, wondering if, or when, you will throw us a bone?

Sorry to have to do this, but you've forced my hand. I know the book/movie/song this story is based on, thus I know how it ends. Either update "In Another's Shoes" or I will blab! Blab blab blab blab blab! And once this story is ruined, you will have no choice but to finish your other story! HA HA HA HA!

Need proof? Email me. I may be a blackmailer, but if nothing else I give my victims a fair chance.

*Blinks* Sorry, sorry. I meant to review this story, but somehow I got off on a tangent...anyway, this is great. Really great :)

Interesting start so far. I wonder what's up with Leo. Where is he? Update soon. You are doing a good job so far.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

THIS is how to build a cliffie! You've given us barely anything but questions to torment us (and Leo!) until you upload the next chapter. If the alert system fails me on this one I'll... I'll... Well, ok, I can't do much... But I won't be happy!

Ep!
No, wait. You can't leave him there!
More! More! More!

I can't come up with the book or movie yet, so you just gotta keep going with this. =oD