I loved it, therefore, I shall review.
Great story, I gotta say that. The thing I loved the most was the way you've written it: a lot about what they think and such. Especially in the earlier chapters, I think. And I liked the part when Axel got jealous and such, as well, the same goes for when I got to know that he was schizophrenic. I really didn't like the idea of Axel being that mean just for the fun of it D:
I'm so looking forward to the next update!

Love,
Pathetic

ur story is so sweet! i luv it! plz up date soon!

Aww what a great story you have so far! : D I read it in one sitting (I really had nothing better to do :P)
I can see that you started this in 07 and are still working on it. That takes some serious dedication! Keep up the good work I'm watching the story so hopefully I can read more when you update next! ^_^

LOVED IT! I especially loved the chapter where we found out Axel was schizophrenic! I cried. Seriously.

Anyway, very emotional and touching. I love how it took someone else puttin' moves for Axel to make one! XD

Am kinda satisfied with the sex scene too... Lol kinda feel a little perv right now... Anyway i just let out a HUGE FINALLY for Roxas and Axel. Pwease update this amazing thing soon will ya?

Am still looving the stoorie~~ <3<3 :3

...Sweet Shiva above. FINALLY... God, have start wondering hoe long it would take for him to realise it xD An Reno is sutch a horny crack as xp

Am still loveing tha stoorie~ <3 ;3

I almost start crie at the last bit T-T .A-At l..least th-thay hav..ve each other no... now *sob* -so beautiful-

Heh.. um... LOL anyway i still love tha stoorie~ <3 :3

Aw how cute he replace ciggs with Roxas... Hey! Lol mabye thats a little wherid but i think it's cute anyway :3 Still love the storie, and going for the next chapter bibi :3 <3

...FINALLY. Is the really right word! Gods, heh. But it's kinda funny reading Riku as the frustrated one xD And i so had kick Soras as if he dumpt Riku there... Lul, but anyway still love the storie i gonna read next chapter now bibi <3 :3

REVIEW PLEASE AND TELL ME HOW YOU LIKE IT? D:

Yup i like it it's really good ^^ and about :
God, a kid who's mute and one who's schizo.
It's kinda pain in the ass but i hope thay work it out. One funny creep to an other. Plus the ting that happen between Riku and Sore is really heleriuse xD

Oh god pleasepleaseplease update soon, i'm loving this fict sosososososo much! Roxas is just too cute as a mute! and i LOVE the plot! its simple and sweet and easy to follow, it isn't too complicated and i Love the couples!
i really hope Roxas gets his voice back. it was just so sad when he tried to speak to Axel and almost forgot he couldn't! *sniff* it just made you want to give him a big hug!

ow, i want roxas shaped cookies =D
that was just... awesome ! this is so a great story : i read all the chapters in a couple of hours x)
anyway : update soon please (a)

*evil laughter* BURN! *sets Reno on fire* And stay away from Roxas! lol

Please update again soon!

Ohmgee! This story is soo cute! I'm looking foreward to the rest!!

I adore this fic!! Please write some more soon :D I love the descriptions and the way the characters personalities are written!! Please carry on!!