Hm...pretty good! Sounds almost exactly like Ashe. If you write more like it, I'll read 'em and review.

This is still better than most of the stories here. Nice job.

Think it would've been better if you'd ended it three lines earlier, at "But how I wish I was doing it with you by my side." But it's still a good fic.

Shaky but definitely IC. It deserves to be kept up and not taken down. I applaud you for trying. Don't be too hard on yourself. You've done a good Ashe.