 thewriter96 2009-11-15 . chapter 4cool |
 roastedheart 2009-10-20 . chapter 5NO LOVE AT ALL FOR THE WOLVES! i like that you've turned them closer to animals...it makes the rejection of jacob kind of painless. is this a feel good story? also, great job with the writing...some superfluous stuff, "brief seconds" and maybe some punctuation errors, but nothing that detracts too much from your casual reader...nice job! |
 fresh-BLOOD-was-drawn-2night 2009-10-17 . chapter 1kool story |
 77049sma 2009-10-15 . chapter 20plz plz write more |
 soton 2009-10-03 . chapter 12Really, really loving your story. |
 alexandra 2009-09-30 . chapter 23 hello...i hope u right more b/c i really did enjoy this story so plz plz plz make more...thanks so much
alexandra |
 bananacupcake09 2009-09-27 . chapter 23this is so sad, I litteraly started crying. |
 bananacupcake09 2009-09-27 . chapter 7I love it. Can't get enough. |
 4everhis91 2009-09-21 . chapter 23WOW ... I loved the ending and the way everything turned in time to teach the wolves of their own animal "dangerous" nature. They always tried to make it seem like they were not dangerous and only the vampires were cause for concern for the humans of the area. I guess its true... A things in good time :) loved the story ! Thanks for writting :) |
 4everhis91 2009-09-21 . chapter 22poor Charlie ... I am so glad Bella could save him and tht he was able to see her and realize she was safe and happy |
 4everhis91 2009-09-21 . chapter 21yes ... the truck gets to be pimped out ... Rose will do a fantastic job restoring it :) I am so glad you added this into th story. I wanted to know about Charlie and the truck was just icing on he cake :) |
 4everhis91 2009-09-21 . chapter 19“You belong to me, Bella, as I belong to you and nothing or no one will ever come between us.” His silky voice was a menacingly urgent growl.
WOW that says it all! I love forceful on the edge of scary Edward! |
 4everhis91 2009-09-21 . chapter 18go Bella :) the animal sidee took over and I think now she has completed another milestone (with carlislr and Jaz's help) to becoming a real Cullen and understanding her new world even better :) huum I wonder did Esme and Alice stay behind to take care of some surpizes ... why didnt they go and hunt too... I bet ur up to something interesting in the next chapters hehehe |
 4everhis91 2009-09-21 . chapter 17the flowers sound so wonderful... did you make it up for this chapter or were u insired by the real thing... i would love to see it if u had an actual arrangment pic |
 4everhis91 2009-09-17 . chapter 16i love the purring :) Aro is so hard to figure out sometimes I wish the cullens had a better friendship with him ... like carlisle seems to have ... I wondered if aro would be invited to the wedding as a show of good faith and friendship |