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thewriter96
2009-11-15 . chapter 4
cool
roastedheart
2009-10-20 . chapter 5
NO LOVE AT ALL FOR THE WOLVES! i like that you've turned them closer to animals...it makes the rejection of jacob kind of painless. is this a feel good story? also, great job with the writing...some superfluous stuff, "brief seconds" and maybe some punctuation errors, but nothing that detracts too much from your casual reader...nice job!
fresh-BLOOD-was-drawn-2night
2009-10-17 . chapter 1
kool story
77049sma
2009-10-15 . chapter 20
plz plz write more
soton
2009-10-03 . chapter 12
Really, really loving your story.
alexandra
2009-09-30 . chapter 23
hello...i hope u right more b/c i really did enjoy this story so plz plz plz make more...thanks so much

alexandra
bananacupcake09
2009-09-27 . chapter 23
this is so sad, I litteraly started crying.
bananacupcake09
2009-09-27 . chapter 7
I love it. Can't get enough.
4everhis91
2009-09-21 . chapter 23
WOW ... I loved the ending and the way everything turned in time to teach the wolves of their own animal "dangerous" nature. They always tried to make it seem like they were not dangerous and only the vampires were cause for concern for the humans of the area. I guess its true... A things in good time :) loved the story ! Thanks for writting :)
4everhis91
2009-09-21 . chapter 22
poor Charlie ... I am so glad Bella could save him and tht he was able to see her and realize she was safe and happy
4everhis91
2009-09-21 . chapter 21
yes ... the truck gets to be pimped out ... Rose will do a fantastic job restoring it :) I am so glad you added this into th story. I wanted to know about Charlie and the truck was just icing on he cake :)
4everhis91
2009-09-21 . chapter 19
“You belong to me, Bella, as I belong to you and nothing or no one will ever come between us.” His silky voice was a menacingly urgent growl.

WOW that says it all! I love forceful on the edge of scary Edward!
4everhis91
2009-09-21 . chapter 18
go Bella :) the animal sidee took over and I think now she has completed another milestone (with carlislr and Jaz's help) to becoming a real Cullen and understanding her new world even better :) huum I wonder did Esme and Alice stay behind to take care of some surpizes ... why didnt they go and hunt too... I bet ur up to something interesting in the next chapters hehehe
4everhis91
2009-09-21 . chapter 17
the flowers sound so wonderful... did you make it up for this chapter or were u insired by the real thing... i would love to see it if u had an actual arrangment pic
4everhis91
2009-09-17 . chapter 16
i love the purring :) Aro is so hard to figure out sometimes I wish the cullens had a better friendship with him ... like carlisle seems to have ... I wondered if aro would be invited to the wedding as a show of good faith and friendship
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