Well, not much action here. Oh, Julia...why run off and say those things when you think so otherwise? Hehe. And Jin's being smug here...hmm.

Heihachi's got something up his sleeve...whatever it is I hope it won't be too bad for Julia's sake.

And the language barrier has been broken. Well, for a while I guess...?

Man, Jin is being agressive!

I didn't realize until now how interesting and rather cute it was when Jin and Julia try to communicate. :D But like they say, love knows no bounds - even with languages.


I have to admit though...there are certain parts in your writing that confuse me and some typos I try to ignore. Still, I like the pacing of this story and will just let those minor errors slip.


Oh, and I love Xiaoyu here again :D

Oh my, boys will be boys.

I love how you portray Xiaoyu here. Despite her cheery and energetic attitude, she actually turns out to be quite mature and the peacemaker of the group.

review for chapter 3:

Woah! Chapter 3 and they're already going at it! Haha!

Although, I'm not sure if Jin is acting in-character here...Oh well, this IS fanfiction and I guess from his experience I wouldn't be surprised if he's acting all cold and jerk-ish.

I'm liking the progression of this story so far. :D

I wonder what'll happen in the next chapter? I hope Jin will warm up to Julia eventually. :D

hi!your story is wondeful!!when you are going to write a new chapter?i want to read more!
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I love you story, PLEASE UPDATE!

That was a great chapter. I can't wait until it's June, so you can update more. :D

No Julia T_T oh well I guess deserves what he sees (Let see if Jin can kick his butt or will he lose Julia to another man hehe update soon!)

yay! you updated! lol! loved it ! update soon :D !

This story is so cute! I wish you would come out to see my Tekken stories sometime. I hope we can be friends. :3

This story is intersting! I've been dieing for it to update.

Yay update, Julia's finally getting out and Jin gonna do something finally!

The story is getting better and better hope you update soon

great chapter hope u update soon!