Where is chapter 4? Are you going to post it soon. It was so funny when Serena and Darien got caught and when the girls got droped in the water. Please post the rest.

That was a cute story. hurry up and finish it

OK Here is the point you better and I mean better get another chapter out. That was so funny. I got strange looks from my miece's cause I was laughing so hard.

Nice. Good. Cool. But the other two chapters are WAY to short. Please DO continue.

Mina-chan (a.k.a. Serena _)

that was great!

i like it!

all that fuss over a kiss but it is funny

Hey! Your story is brill! Can i recommend it in my column? I want to become a columnist and write an all anime column, but to do that i have to write a test column, though if i get through i'll definatlely recommend yours in the real thing. Can you e-mail me if you'll let me use your story? ()

Don't worry, i'll give it a good review! Keep up the good work, Jen. (kungfu_kitty/QueenDaimao hee hee me have two names!)

please hurry i love your story it's funny and stuff and i never meant that in a offensive way 'cause it's really good

I LOVE IT!PLEASE WRITE MER SOON!

Aww how kawaii he kissed her! Whoo hoo! Well, I'll be looking forward to next chapter! Ja ne! . *starts singing again* but I might just stay another night if my credit cards still down there... o.O

*pouts slightly* you didn't write that much.. you should write more.. *nods frantically* please?

*pouts and sniffles* continue! continue! continue! please?

_ This is a very nice start...but it seems a wee bit rushed and you have a few grammer mistakes...other than that...good.

this is a very good sroty but y wuz da 2nd chap so short? I love it when they threw them in the lake! Au revior MAd Cow