That was cute. :3 I love how you write. But...there was one tiny mistake. D: It should have said that there was three Is when you said two. I don't know how I noticed that, but eh... Besides that, it was a great story. Keep up the good work! ^^

The unscrambling part's so hard... I probably can't do it in thirty minutes. Does Marui like Niou in this fic? I quote "He pulled away, feeling the redhead’s jealous glare boring into the back of his skull and ignoring it." He likes Niou? I know it's a story, but Niou had a perfect way to make Yagyuu jealous. -_-"

Aww! I love it. :D It's so very Niou to say something with puzzles, and so very Yagyuu to stare at them until they work. :)

Great job!

Lol! Niou certainly had unique ways to make Yagyuu jealous.

I applaud Yagyuu for solving the puzzle. I tried to solve it w/o spoiling myself--I'll never be good enough. Pff.

LOVE IT! :)

There definitely aren't enough D1 fics, thank you. =)

This is probably the fourth time I've read this since you posted it on Livejournal, but I never cease to be amazed by your writing skills and felt the need to comment. Your characterizations of Niou and Yagyuu are great, and I'm looking forward to reading more lovely Rikkai D1 fics. :D