Loved that story. It was really well written.
You should definatly do a sequl.

very good right more plz.

Woo, good job! That was hot :D

I liked it! ;)

this was good. well done.

Very nice touch(no pun intended). I like how you left it so that it runs with canon. it's pretty cool.

You should a write a sequel, that was so hot.
Like seriously. Favorites definitely.

great story

-suggestion: it wasn't obvious enough to me that Luna didn't notice Ginny in the room until that specific moment; particularly the way she shouted her name made it seem like perhaps she was glad to see her.
I might have been the only one confused, though...but it could be re-worded.

-praise: I was glad you made it so that Luna had smaller breasts, while Ginny had rather large ones. some stories make Luna's large, probably in attempt to make it more arousing. but it fits each of them better this way.
also, I greatly appreciated the way you put Luna's views about sexual orientation. it greatly fits her as well. :]

-hmm: Luna doesn't seem like the type to be smug. politely curious, maybe?

-it was quite arousing.
good work.

great good i loved it definatly gonna be in my favs when i sign in!
oh and by da way thanks for making me horny..NOt but boi dat was hot

THAT WAS HOTT WRITE A SEQUAL WITH A STRAPP ON!

YAYY!
wow i thought she was gonna be all Harry-bashing and it totally wasn't
it was sexy, provocative and very hot
and she still loves Harry
love the pairing and i love you!

wow I am HOOKED onto this couple now! It's a great story, a lot of yours are!

+Favorites+

please write a second chapter with a strap on!! this was great! although i dont really read femmeslash, i like this.

PLEASE WRITE THE 2nd CHAPTER!