This was a good story. I'm sorry you ended it s soon. I would have liked to see your version. It was a nice twist.

Hey, I love your story! Very original! Just one little thing: you would not say "you two are twin siblings." Beings twins automatically means being siblings. Sorry to be so nitpicky, but I have a twin brother and we've been asked before, "Hey, are you two like, twin siblings?" and it really ticks me off! Like I said, love your story!

YOU KILLED OFF LUKE? HOW CAN YOU KILL OFF LUKE? Ahem...sorry...hehe...excuse for the rudenes...YOU KILLED OFF LUKE? Dang it...how can you? Please tell me it's not true...sigh...o wells...ur fic...

Awesome! Really kewl...I don't read Star Wars fics asa often..but I really like Star Wars and I would say this is really interesting!

A MAIN CHARACTER? How could you do that? If I ever get my hands on you I'll...Oh, I don't know! But you will pay, oh yes, you will pay.

different, but i like it a lot.

i love it when han calls them twins unknowingly...ah!

I like it, the ending was a little sad though. Killing Luke off, that about the only part I didn't like of the story.

I really liked the ending, although, of course short (but I'm sure you knew that!) But there was a problem with the end that was there all through the story- Sentence fragments. You had had way too many, I'm afraid. I'm sure you're a much better writer know, I can tell from the last chapter, but please try using "and" a bit more..

i like...vD

alright, another part. MORE!

(for part one)A few misspelled words. It's NaL Hutta, not NaR Hutta. Organa, not Oranga. Preety good, but real short.

Good luck on your play D

I can just tell that this is going to be a tragedy (.

Ah well a great story. I had a thought about one like it. I am planning to write it. So if you see something like it posted, I am not a copy cat D

Except in my version they are never seperated.

Great story

Oh,no!You have to write more!Please?I read the beginning of this at tf.n,but you stoped posting there.So please continue this great storie! :)

Yeah! Leia, meet Yoda, Yoda, meet Leia! Love it! Write more! Have Luke get sort of irritated too! -