As of this chapter, I found the story too unbelievable so I will no longer read any more of it. It was decent until now though.

... update please...

HELL YES! Burn baby burn! can't wait to continue.

i hope you're happy, my nails are now stubs. ;) good story as always.

You're a jerk! this story is too addicting! lol. Great job and i don't really hate you. mostly... ;D the way you present this is wonderful, although i am slightly confused as to the timeline, is naruto like 8 and the body guard of the hokage? hmm. anyway dang good job. will continue reading, all the while jealous of your writing ability. *sigh*

third time god your good

me again i love the samurai and dynasty warriors references if theyre not sorry but they are similar

sorry for this being mainly unhelpful most of my reviews will be like that tho so nothing personal. im only just starting to read this and i've been close to tears twice so far. my "friends for lack of a beter term all say im a immoral mess ( when they're being polite) and im not sorry to agree so that is something rare. you have a sadly rare gift. you should do this professionally writing that is. id read your work

Well, I wanted to review this story for quite some time, I but couldn't find the courage to do so (Call me lazy or whatever). Anyway now that I'm at it, let's review Lost Soul:

When I first saw the story, I was somewhat dubious; I thought 'Again another god-like-I'm-so-strong-and-awesome Naruto fanfic'. Not that I find strong!Naruto fics to be rubbish, but I like them only if they are credible. I honestly thought your Naruto was a over-powered, especially when he beat the fifty ANBU that were garding the Daimyo. I mean, come on, fifty elite ninjas trained to fight off any intruders slaughtered by a six years old kid. I really hate when the ANBU or jounin ninjas are thought as nothing more than fodder. But if it is for the sake of the plot, meh, let's see where it is heading.

The greatest shock came in the form of Naruto's sister. At that moment I thought 'Lord, don't tell me that when he will meet his sister, he will be all smiles and will go hopping in the woods with pink rabbits and all that sh*t'. I saw that happen once, scarier than assisting to Orochimaru's closet boy-loving club monthly meetings...
Well thankfully not, it didn't change his personality drastically.

The greatest, no, the most EPIC moment of the story was without a doubt the Akkisho arrival. Now THAT was some good sh*t. I think I read this chapter at least ten times due to its awesomeness. I think that it is on par with the Naruto vs Akatsuki fight.

I tell you, you are really gifted with writing fighting scenes, a skill that few authors possess. When I read your the fights you describe, I litterally see what is happening, like it was a video or something. And for that I deeply respect you. I'd love to see the fights in film.

I'd love to go on and on but unfortunately my willpower is diminishing, so I will only say one thing:

You are the best Naruto fanfiction author that I have ever seen, and your story Lost Soul is the best I have read (For the plot planning, not counting one shots etc...). You just Rock, and I hope you update soon.

Faithfully, a reader that follows this story very closely since chapter thirty,

Sickgleam.


Ps: Excuse me for the spelling mistakes, as I'm not english, I try to do my best but it's not easy.

Ps2: Sorry if I sounded like a a**-licking reviewer, but these were my overall feelings.

Ps3: I hope that the quality of this fic will not decrease, like many fanfics when they reach their ends, but I believe in you :P

Nearly perfect. A rare label in itself to grant any story and yours has it. Tobi’s fight and internal dialog made me laugh. The storyline thus far has consistently remained gripping and of interest. Evidence that much thought and foresight has been placed in each individual action and event has continuously been present throughout. These days grammar is a minor thing and so, overlooking it, the fic continues to be near perfect. The sole problem that I still cannot wrap my mind around is a scenario in chapter 75 in which Akina impossibly used two elements simultaneously with absolutely no long term development of the art beforehand. It has not been touched on since that battle but it bothers me all the same. That aside, good work.

Coup de'ta

A point that must be questioned. Akina use of her new combo of lightening and flame. It was specifically stated that the shear heat of the move burned away flesh until the bone of her hands were exposed. How is it structurally and logically possible for her to continue using ninjutsu involving her hands when her chakra coils in that area has burned away? I can understand techniques from the mouth or other part of the body but the hands come off as unrealistic after that singular event. Surely you do not expect us, the readers, to believe that even the nine tails can regrow chakra coils? Please explain the logic behind that to us in additional to how she can use two elemental compositions at the same time to begin with.

Wow, so far, your story is the best fan fic I have ever read :) The plot with it's uniqueness and the 95 chapters, make it hard not to love it :D Can't wait to read more, and I'm pretty sure you won't disappoint :)

:O ..Oh. Em. Gee.! I hope Naruto doesn't die :(

Wow. The battles just keep coming, which is great :-) I hope the peace comes soon, and humanity is returned. You've done a fuck awesome job on this story :)