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Goshikku Seirei
2009-09-13 . chapter 1
Hahahaha!! So funny the last line!! xD Good job!! xD I hope you write a sequel?? xD Good job!
beyondwonder
2009-07-04 . chapter 1
I adored this! Interesting idea too to put them in a meat locker. Thank you so much for sharing this - i really hope you write more!
bloodredcherry
2009-02-20 . chapter 1
This story was wonderful! I can't think of any criticism at all.
starrylaa
2008-08-17 . chapter 1
This was really good. Probably the best D/J I've read. The humour was great as was the characterization. I do hope you do more D/J in this kind of vein as you're really good at it!
Tonee
2008-05-11 . chapter 1
Awesome story. First thought: Why they are freezing? Had to go outdoor because Sam was in the motel room, too? 2. so hunt went wrong. Where are they? Car crash on a lonely, snowy road? A cave? A basement? But frozen meat locker- I would have never expected this. Great idea, great way to tell it!
CelticWarrioress
2008-03-22 . chapter 1
This is actually very good!!I didn't think so from the beginning but as the story sank in i started to like it more.It is quite unconventional having the climax(in our case Dean/Jo action) in the beginning and the end being more quiet without showing them again.

The dialogue was clever,funny and very close to how the characters speak which is great.:) I also find very creative that in the beginning of the story we are just led to assume that Dean and Jo are cuddling or sth but soon we realise they are trapped.lol Some parts i loved(one of them being the ghostkiss) and in other parts i laughed(which, dude, she's not even a little hot, so there goes that fantasy).Overall,nice job!!

Oh forgot to mention i loved the use of the quote given before the story.I always like it when writers do this,it sets the mood and it is very inspirational.:)
Lucifer's Garden
2007-09-14 . chapter 1
I'm surprised at how much I enjoyed this. The characters were spot on! Well done. :)
rrainyddaze
2007-08-18 . chapter 1
LOVED IT!! :)

soo good!

haha okay, i think you get the picture...

by the way, " (which, dude, she's not even a little hot, so there goes that fantasy)" was HILARIOS and totally Dean...
NikiJensensgirl
2007-06-10 . chapter 1
That was really god!
We don't have nearly enough DeanJo fics on this site so that was refreshing. You wrote it brilliantly and I think you'll be pleased to know that I have no critisism to give out which is a miricale for me!
DeepBlueQL
2007-06-08 . chapter 1
I love this story.

It's perfect!

Thank you so much for sharing it!
AngelKougaeri
2007-05-12 . chapter 1
Wickedly good.
pxleno52
2007-05-02 . chapter 1
Great fic :) Loved the entire thing; especially the last line
Aquarius Angel
2007-04-28 . chapter 1
'you're just jealous' Exactly, who wouldn't want to curl up next a hot body like dean's! (or jo's in sam's case)
Bea2688
2007-03-10 . chapter 1
This was well-written. I wasn't sure of where it was going at one point... But,I enjoyed it.
Krusader
2007-03-09 . chapter 1
Sweet! I so loved this. The Dean and Jo interaction was really cute and for once Sam gets to save Dean! Hee. Sam's remark about how he found them was great, as was Dean's "bite me" response. =D Awesome work!
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