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| D1G1T4L darkness 2007-03-09 ch 1, | abusewow so col. i feels so bads for louie. he saved danny |
| mel60 2007-03-08 ch 1, | abuseReally well written piece. Your descriptions of things are mature and well thought out. The details are great! I was even starting to feel a little suffocated by the home. You also have a great sense of Danny's character and voice. I could completely picture Danny and hear him saying these things. Nicely Done. |