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Reviews For: The Visit

D1G1T4L darkness
2007-03-09
ch 1,
abusewow so col. i feels so bads for louie. he saved danny
mel60
2007-03-08
ch 1,
abuseReally well written piece. Your descriptions of things are mature and well thought out. The details are great! I was even starting to feel a little suffocated by the home. You also have a great sense of Danny's character and voice. I could completely picture Danny and hear him saying these things.
Nicely Done.
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