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| Sue1313 2008-05-10 ch 12, | abuseThis story was wonderful. I just love the relationship between the team members. Hotch and Gideon are such good parents to the team members. I was glad he just didn't jump into forgiving JJ. She did not treat him right and should have to work to win his love again. You did a great job on the writing. I couldn't stop after I started it. |
| tearbos 2007-07-21 ch 12, | abuseReally great story, lots of drama. |
| Alyce 2007-06-07 ch 5, anon. | abuseGreat story! Thanks and keep up the good work! |
| TutorGirlml 2007-04-09 ch 12, anon. | abuseHey, just wanted to say that I really really got into this one. I was all wrapped up in the Reid/JJ/Karen triangle and was surprised by the twist of Karen ending up being the psycho out for revenge against JJ. I just have to know if you're going to continue in the vein of this story with another story or a one-shot or anything. I want JJ to have to prove her feelings for Reid and have him forgive her and they end up together. :) It was really great reading and I just wanted to know if we'd get anymore. You've set it up so I still have questions about this one in particular. |
| Wicked Suspencer 2007-04-09 ch 12, | abuseWonderful fic! Nice twist (which I won't mention here since possibly others who haven't read might check the reviews first...lalala...erm. yeah.) It's hard to pull of twists like this without giving it away too soon (yet not making it come completely out of left field), so kudos! Also love that you've left Reid/JJ unresolved; it's sad, but realistic--and leaves room for exploring later. :D |
| SpencerRied 2007-04-03 ch 12, | abuseGlad that JJ and Reid are not hurt. |
| Aelia O'Hession 2007-03-30 ch 12, | abuseAH! The end? This cannot be! You left so much open! Do I smell a mini-sequel? Or perhaps I'm dreaming, because it is rather late at night. Oh my. Karen/Lisa has some major issues. Not to sound like a complete freak, but perhaps things are safer now that she's dead. I know it sounds terrible, but there is some truth to it. I knew he wasn't a complete sodding idiot! The boy has brains and knows how to use them. And the whole team comes to the rescue. I love it. What a big happy family. Well, almost. There are still some unresolved issues between JJ and Spence. Poor Gideon and his chicken marsala. What a waste. Yay! I congratulate you on a extremely well written piece of work. Until next time. |
| CatWillow 2007-03-30 ch 12, | abuseAw. At least after a homocidal maniac, JJ will look like an angel! By now, she has a pretty good idea of how to seduce our Spence! |
| criminally charmed 2007-03-30 ch 12, | abusethat was great! thanks for the ride! |
| PacWoman 2007-03-30 ch 12, | abuseThat was a wonderful ending. It ended just the way I wanted it to. This was one of the best stories that I've read in awhile. The ending was so intense and your idea is origional. The descriptions were life-like and I was emotionally involved with the story. Great job and good luck on your future stories. Thanks for writing a good story! |
| CatWillow 2007-03-29 ch 11, | abuseI think this is your best to date! Jan |
| CatWillow 2007-03-28 ch 10, | abuseWhoa! I am SERIOUSLY intreagued! Will get to the next chap. when I have time. Jan |
| PacWoman 2007-03-28 ch 11, | abuseOh, it's getting intence. Everyone is starting to figure it out. I hope someone will get to Reid before Karen does. |
| Aelia O'Hession 2007-03-28 ch 11, | abuseWhat an evil **. You have just given me a thousand more reasons to hate Karen. I find it absolutely twisted that she's enacting highschool vengance. I'm her age and I don't give a damn about what happened to me in highschool. Freaky sociopath. Poor JJ. Everything in her past is being dreged up just because some sociopath who can't get over what happened wants revenge. I would not want to be in her position for all the tea in China. I love Garcia going behind JJ's back and calling Morgan. She knows that there are some situations in life that you just can't go through by yourself. I just know Morgan is gonna have a brilliant plan that involves the whole team coming the the rescue. Finally Spence is using the brains that were stuffed into his skull. Its about time, too. As Robin Williams said in one of his stand up acts, "men don't have enough blood to think with both heads." This typifies Spence's current situation. Oh the dreaded doorbell! Beware of vengeful sociopath on the other side! I can't wait for more!! |
| notesofwimsey 2007-03-28 ch 11, | abuseNice cliffhanger! I liked the shifting POVs, and I love the angst you put in Spence so easily. You definitely know his character very intimately; he's consistent and just a little heartbreaking. |