Woow, this is an awesome story. Take the ducklings bowling was brilliant, but this was even better. I especially liked cranky Cameron, and the Cuddy/Wilson scenes. Hope you'll keep writing them.
Thanks a lot for writing, it was a real pleasure reading =)

Xx

fantastic story! the ending was very funny and sweet and i was worried that cuddy might die in the previous chapter!! i wish it was huddy instead of wuddy, though, but it was still very good. I should stop whining, shouldn't i? do you like huddy? if you do...

SOME IDEAS FOR MORE STORIES... U DON'T HAVE TO DO THESE IF U DONT WANT TO:
* A Huddy story where the characters have really cool superpowers!
* One where the hospital is on fire!
* A Huddy one where the characters are stranded or trapped somewhere!
* Maybe one where the characters have a party!
- You know, fun stuff!

HOUSE/CUDDY & CHASE/CAMERON 4EVA!!

so far so good! i love huddy and chameron heaps!! (well, maybe huddy a bit more, but it's all good.)

i liked this story & all that wilson-cuddy stuff :)

This was a lovely story! I really enjoyed it! You are such a fabulous writer! Keep up the great work! :)

Smiles! Great story!

-Aly

Over the past week I have just read both 'Take the Ducklings Bowling' and 'When You Least Expect It'. I decided to wait until I'd finished them both to leave a comment.

I loved them. Absolutely loved them. I'm such a Cameron/Chase shipper and I thought you captured them perfectly! You write so well, it's brilliant. And Pamela! Amazing character. I loved her interactions with House. They made me laugh :D and everyone knows that House will eventually one day impregnant Cuddy. It's just gonna happen! (Whether it appears on the show, is unknown, but it's gonna happen anyway ;) ) and how Wilson was there and adopted the child and aw! Such a nice touch.

TTDB was such a fun fic to read. I loved the whole bowling thing (I love bowling) and the outback themed room was classic! And House getting thrown out of the bowling centre! And now they have twins...WYLEI was a perfect sequel. Poor Cameron but you worked with it so well. I was getting images of the computer screen on my retina's when I left the PC I would read so many chapters at a time!! It was (mildly) funny.

I love your writing (and have been reading you're 104 Ways fics on LJ. I'm futuresaysrun on there.) You're so good, it's refreshing to see a really decent fanfic writer after stumbling across so many less-than-decent ones.

Keep writing,
RavenaStorm x

Oh, what a perfect ending! I could just cry happy tears. I like your writing better than the show itself. :) You can't move away from creating things like this. You're just TOO good at it. Got it?! Good!

This was excellent!

I'm happy to see improvement for Cuddy. I love the T-shirt with "Raising Hell." How appropriate is that? Wilson is going to be stuck raising a little piece of hell if that kid is anything like House. LOL

These last two chapters have been awesome--this new amazingly dramatic twist. All the characters have been written well. I liked the House/Wilson interactions. I *love* it whenever Chase is right about anything. LOL It all seems really in character. I like the universe you've created here.

Wow... just when I thought things were getting all bright and shiney and happy! I hope Cuddy will be okay. Funny to hear House say "Our son" to Wilson. :)

Ah, so there's another baby on the way! I wonder if it's actually harder to write "happy" stories like we were talking about earlier today. I can imagine how torn Cameron would be over leaving the babies in a day care.

I'm very curious about what happens next, but I've got to get to bed, so I'll finish the story tomorrow. I can't wait to find out what's going to happen with the hospital.

I really feel for Cameron. She's got a wonderful blessing, but all this hell that comes with it. I loved the "Pick a child" scene and House's thoughts about Ethan and Emily.

Either I'm psychic or the popularity of the name Ethan made me think that would be the boy's name. The emotions really come through in this. I wanted to smile and laugh and cry right along with them.