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| Hazmatt 2008-04-12 ch 12,  | abuseGreat chapter! I really liked this story! I hope the next story will be as good as this one! |
| Hazmatt 2008-04-12 ch 11, | abuseGreat chapter! Poor Angela, that would be so scary! I hope Booth'll be okay! |
| Hazmatt 2008-04-12 ch 10, | abuseGreat chapter! Very intense! I really enjoyed it! I love this story! |
| Hazmatt 2008-04-12 ch 9, | abuseGreat chapter! I really liked it! The interaction between Bones and Parker was wonderful! I loved it! They are so cute together! Booth, well that was funny when he interrupted them, especially his conversation with Angela! Congratulations on the over 100 review! Can't wait for the new episode either! |
| Hazmatt 2008-04-12 ch 8, | abuseGreat chapter! Parker's speech patterns are adorable! I really enjoyed this chapter! Poor Parker, learning that his Mom is dead! Epps may not have had a master, but was he someone's master? The part with the doctor was hilarious! Bones and Parker together was adorable! |
| Hazmatt 2008-04-12 ch 7, | abuseGreat chapter! I really enjoyed the scene where Bones thinka about Booth and his position and all of that. Wonderful! I hope her wrist heals! |
| Hazmatt 2008-04-12 ch 6, | abuseGreat chapter! I really eboyed it! I like the interaction between the Squints! Wonderful! I don't get ho a shattered wrist would affect Bones' ability to do her job? He can still examine bones even if she had limited movement in her wrist. I liked that twist anyway, especailly waht Angela said on the subject, hilarious! |
| Hazmatt 2008-04-12 ch 5, | abuseGreat chapter! I really liked it! Poor Bones! That must have hurt! And Booth, things like this should happen to people so many times in one day! |
| Hazmatt 2008-04-12 ch 4, | abuseGreat chapter! I really enjoyed it! I like the way that Bones and Parker reacted to each other! I hope she finds answers and that Parker and Booth will be okay! |
| Hazmatt 2008-04-12 ch 3, | abuseGreat chapter! I love Bones' reaction! That would be so scary to get a message like that, especially when your son's in the hospital because of it! What was the other show cameo thing? |
| Hazmatt 2008-04-12 ch 2, | abuseGreat chapter! I hope that Parker stays stable and that no one tries to get at the Squints! |
| Hazmatt 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abuseWow! Great chapter! So emotional! I hope Parker's okay! |
| Squint-1121 2008-03-07 ch 12, | abuseOmgs Omgs Omgs! I was about to grab the nearest key and go for your eyes until I saw 'sequal' lol. I LOVE this story to bits and pieces. Its get better and better!! I thought you had Epps cheat death for a while there. Thank you so much for updating again. I'll go read chapter 1 of the next story. :) |
| bb-4ever 2008-03-06 ch 12, | abusegreat couple of chapters to end this on! great cliff hanger ending. will booth get out of this? will bones keep her promise to him? look forward to reading the sequel. |
| gwmclintock9 2008-03-05 ch 12, | abusegreat story, but where is the conclusion? You stop a story at the climax? Why? what are you thinking? Why split it here? Why cut the story in half here? That doesn't make any sense. I mean, yes, you have stated the next section is going to be more mature, but honestly, that doesn't change the first part of this is viewed. By cutting it here, you leave the reader without any resolution what so ever. Why? |