will there be a seuqal XD

:) the ending was quite unexpected!

XD I liked it but you spelled Mokona wrong XD I'm sure you get that a lot but I did like it XD XD XD

ahaha! XD thats great :3

AWSOME!

fye is a schemist! lol. can u continue this?

I'm so sad. Why do all the freak'in good stories have to end so early? Oh well...It was REALLY worth reading.

I love this story, albeit its pretty random. However, I think you made a mistake in your calcultions; 2 square feet is about the size of a LAPTOP. Not even one person could fit in it. (A=bh2)

cute!

wow. this is just soo kawaii! haha...i would have never guessed that fai plotted with mokona (it's a he, i think, or would it have been better as an it?! and his name is mOkona). some typos, but it's no big. ^_^ really cute!

That was so hot!

Not bad, not bad... but... There's a thing that bugs me... It's Mokona. Not Makona. And Mokona is a He. not a she. XD;

Oh that was great xDD especially the end. But isn't it spelled "Mokona"? Whateva

haha aw! so makona was in on this too! xD

Great fic! Andi is impressed! ^_^ KuroFai 4 eva!