quite a good story! I liked it. Yes, yes, all hail JK Rowling. You had Riddle quite in character. Did you finish book 7 yet? It was amazing.

MA BROTHA!! THIS IS TOTALLY SWEET DUDE! the characterisation is like out of this WORLD.

I'm sorry. Mathematics has gone to my headicular! Ok. I'm going to try and write like I know what I'm talking about.

I was astounded by the imagery and subtle concepts that made such a big impact on the audience. The readers are immediately drawn to the plight of Inman, oh SORRY. wrong book. Ok, I'm seriously starting to worry about my sanity. I will try and act like myself.

I really like it. You hardly ever get to see into the mind of VOLDEMORT(oh crap, I said it, I'M GOING TO DIE!!) and to see him little was so cool. It's like where it all began... very original, and you're writing style is perfect. The bit with the cliff was written B-E-A-YOOUUTifully and I really felt like I was falling, and all the pre-e-etty colours. whee!

Wow, this is not going well. I'm taking a break. Be back in 20.

I'm BACK. Let's get this over and done with so I can get the hell out of here before something else goes wrong. SO. THE MORAL OF THIS EMAIL: The princess of the underworld approves and nods her head at the wonderfulness of this great peice of literature.

wow. have fun interpreting this email.

Omg I loved it. When they were on the cliff.. too amazing.

Nice, very nice - although Voldemort is known to have an aversion to pain and physical injury as of HBP. Aside from that, this is well-written, fun, a good character study.

All hail, all hail indeed.

Why this appears to be your first proper review, one which simply is not asking for the answer to a question which is answered by that little word Complete up the top of the story.

And so I must say, electric pancake, that you continue to be my hero, that 'really nice but slightly vindictive' deity, that one goal of perfection that I may aspire to and never reach.

*cough* sweet writing dude.

is there going to be more?