It was funny when Karai said how did you know and Leo's answer to her. A little birdy. Haha. ^^ It was fun to watch Karai's and Chaplin's romance. Very nice. Liked this story a lot. Great job!

That was amazing! And I'm slightly sad to see it end, but I guess in theory, it's not completely over, for Jim anyways. LOL

I enjoyed it - the action, the adventure, even the romance with Karai and Chaplin, who I have now decided deserve a chance. I knew it in the series, but they never really did anything more about them, so I guess I feel as now we should.

Greatness, for sure yo!

you really piqued my interest I went to the Dark half and I really enjoyed your story. Though confused Karai - Chaplin = vendetta obsessed Karai doesn't it?

AWESOME!UPdate soon plz!

Chaplin was very helpful. Yay the ship is toast! Did Chaplin make it out though?

O.O Him again? You're right. I didn't see that coming. Can't wait for more. ^^

So Cool! Updates!!

So cool!! Can't wait for more! Update soon! If you need help keeping the bunnies alive let me know!!

This is just as good as the first or better. ^^ I like the little bird. It's funny. Can't wait for the next update. :D

Live, bunnies, live! I need to know what happens next!

I don't understand why this is getting slow, few reviews; this story deserves more! Therefore I decided to contribute (is that okay?)
Keep up the good work &, just a little tip, try to lessen A BIT of the descriptive words cuz there's such a thing as being too wordy(I learned that the hard way), particularly with chapter 7. Anyway, great stuff, great stuff, who!

Cool! Can't wait for more!

So Cool! can't wait for more!

That was a really good chapter and so were the others i hope you update soon! Can't wait for more!

Cool! Good chapter!

Can't wait for more!