Wow this was a great story, please, PLEASE continue it.You can really feel the pain that Mana and Seto are going through. In the actual anime it feels kindof like they just accept the fact that most of their friends and loved ones have been killed; and now they must keep on living their lives. That doesn't do Yu-Gi-Oh! justice. Your story truly captured the pain and hardship you feels when you lose someone like that. Especially in Seto and Mana's cases. Seto, who now is faced with the duty of almost single handed ruling a whole country as well as dealing with the loss of the only woman he ever loved, AND his only friends. And Mana who must deal with the emotional impact of losing her best friend and her mentor, not to mention the impact on her body of having to control her heka to keep the [millenium ring?](I assume it's something like this, things got a bit vague there) in check. Wow. please continue on this piece I found it not only a great read, and very different take on the aftermath in Egypt, but also a incredible inspiration for me and my "The-yugioh-fan-fiction-story-so-out-there-and-so-brilliant-and- long-it-will-never-be-written-but-constantly-maintained-and-
mentally-kept-alive-/written"
:)yay.

Nice beginning! I really would like to read further!
I like your style in writing.
And I would read an oneshot with Seto/Mana!!
Keep going!!

wow...
im suprised u dont have n/e reviews yet...
(sorry its like 2:40am so im rele tired)
please update soon i like ur writting style alot its very
descriptive and this sounds like its gonna b a rele good
story! and i'd probably read a setoxmana on-shot
if u wrote it (imma die hard setoxkisara and manaxmahaado
fan so yeah) keep up the good work hope to see more from u!