VERY good story! I'm very glad that I came back to the WAT fanfiction, even after so long, and found some really great stories. I honestly can't wait to read more of your stuff!

Wow, I really enjoyed this! Brilliantly written and perfect because I got to read it all in one fell swoop. Thanks very much, definitely one of the best WAT fics I've read for a while.

Wonderful story. Totally enjoyed every chapter

very good ! write more martin fanfic !

Great story. One that definitely begs to read over and over again!. I love the dynamic between the team members and the fact that in the end, it didn't matter to Martin whether his father was proud of him, he could be proud of himself, who he'd become and what he'd overcome.

Thanks so much for sharing this!

Oh, by the way...

"Don't mess with Texas" indeed!

Do I sense a fellow Eric Close fan?

I thought that the last 2 Chapters were AWESOME. I hope that

Jack, and the Team are going to get Sayers before he kills

Martin. Can't believe that he disappeared the little time

that Danny stood out there talking to Jack. Keep up the

Fantastic Writing. Can't wait to read the next Chapter.

good ! i love martin fanfic !

Laurel - all I can say is: Awesome!

This is *really* good! You have a fantastic handle on suspence and drama! Just keep updating! (please?)

good update - little scaring ! go on I'll wait impatiently your story

So the plot thickens...

I'm thinking this could go a couple different ways regarding the identity of the bad guy.

These two chapters definitely did not disappoint. I love the fact that this story isn't predictable by any means.

Great stuff!

Wow!

Just, WOW!

You've got me hooked!

great start, i really feel for martin he is going through so much update soon

good update soon poor martin what happen to him !