Can you pretty please hurry and update? please!

oh yeah. (kool-aide man style)
I loved this chapter.

Seth and Abel are probably thinking ...oh **.

also, if you need a beta to check your spelling, punctuation, grammatical tenses, etc, I would be more than willing for such an awesome story.

Nice!

Hm... nice chap, and the ciff hanger leaves you wanting si much more! Update soon!

This was freaking awesome. I was really getting in to the story so much that... (trails off) Probably best not to say, but I was really into the story; I hope you update!

THIS IS VERY GOOD PLZ UP DATE SOON!! XD

ah that good i really like it!