I'm sure it's weird to have a review pop up suddenly almost 2 years after you published a story, but better late than never I guess.

I love this fic. This is an oddship that you surprisingly made to work. Your portrayal of Jasper is very interesting, and it's good to get him dirtied up a bit considering the books always portray his relationship with Alice to be absolutely spotless and perfect. And Lauren is also made three-dimensional in this fic, as in a way her bitchiness is justified with the turmoils in her personal life. In the books, I always thought of her as just a flat foil character.

So keep it up, and that Part II sounds interesting. :)

I love this story!! It's amazing but i can actually see the couple! It reminds you of all those AU fics where Bella and Eddie get together but he's dating Tanya or something. But Tanya is evil so it's a little freaky! And i definately think you should wirte a sequel, becuase you need to see if Jasper really loves her or if it's just pity. Just please don't make it a total Mary Sue fic. Alice still needs to win! And i think you should have Alice confront Lauren and tell her that they're married and Lauren is being just like her aunt. Because Lauren deserves it.

Aw, I liked that :D Alice annoys me, anyway. Good job!

So...really weird pairing, but you made it work...great job!!...and yes I agree with the fact Alice wouldnt have known at first, and then by the second time she would probably guess whats going on an pardon Japser just coz she knows he is doing it for somebody else and not him...

and wow, I felt bad for Lauren Mallory, which it doesnt happen often...

that was sick i love jasper and HATE lauren

I really liked it! I hope for more!
~Melissa~

holy shiot no f-ing way! wow that was actually really good though you should make it a sequel

oh the irony... lauren, who hates that her dad is cheating on her mom, has jasper cheat on alice...

still wonderfully written. i really do hope you write more!

--kyra

This is so good. Just brilliant. I'm off to another one of your stories

thnis was wonderful!

Wow, Lauren and Jasper. Surprisingly, i liked it.
Mostly for the jasper, but lauren isnt actually half bad in your story. Id read a part II if you wrote one.

xx

great job! a really well written piece.

OMFG! damn that was an excellent story! so so so so gud! u really shuld write a sequel cos i noe that i wuld definitely read it! please!

WOW, even though that relationship was totally weird, i think it was a powerful piece. good job.

I like the background you gave Lauren. It would explain alot of her meanness. Great one-shot :) I really enjoyed it.