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recey2010
2009-03-22 . chapter 15
this story is one of my favorite so I couldn't help but notive that it has NOT been updated in almost a year. Please dont leave loyal reader like myself waiting. Your work is beautiful and is the epitome of a Meg/Erik fanfic (im a big fan of E/M). Im gald you've incorporated all the other characters including daroga which most authors do not and the way u've incorporated them is perfect. my only complain is you NOT Updating. will erik and meg have a steamy citrusy love session? will they get a family? how involved will nadir be? and will meg be reunited with dancing or/and her mother? Could you possibly consider a love triangle between an american theater producer, meg, and erik? I love triangle because they challege people's love and make their relationship stronger UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE
Lizhi Anne
2009-03-20 . chapter 15
I can't believe that you have been so cruel as to put this on hiatus. I am in absolutely on position to lecture; my entire fiction press account is on hiatus right now, but still. I love this story deeply. I read both in a day and just when I think I've worked out why Meg is fainting all the time you put it on hiatus.

Oh I'm sorry, I don't mean to moan. But please come back. Too many wonderful stories get put to bed on this site and never wake up. It's positively tragic! Bless you dark-hearted rose, and please come back.

On another note, at least you haven't stopped writing completely and I am fully aware that people have lives outside fanfiction.

All the very best, and good luck to Meg. If I'm right, she's going to need it...

l x
Kyrene once Blood Roses
2008-05-28 . chapter 15
...Does she have a tumor or something? That would suck a lot. Like whoa a lot. But her fainting, tiredness, and the pain in her head...There's something wrong with her. Or just stress from Erik? And what did Nadir have? Keep Going!!

Okay...I'm sorry I keep going on this part of the subject but, no one asks questions? The man wore a mask all his life in Paris, he comes to New York and no one asks a questions? Did you explain this and I completely forgot? That's very likely actually...I do that sometimes...
dreamysherry
2008-05-23 . chapter 15
I've very much enjoyed the interaction between dear Nadir and Erik. Nadir does push his luck. :) It was so funny how he managed to get entrance into Erik's house. His weariness of Erik came across very well as well as Meg's apprehension of the whole situation.

Lovely touches with Erik's display of affection towards Meg. Erik is very much Erik in your fic.
faith
2008-05-22 . chapter 15
poor meg I hope she gets better
Friendly Legolas Sporker
2008-05-22 . chapter 15
Hm...
Not sure what to think bout this chappy.
Glad you updated though. (:
Kyrene once Blood Roses
2008-04-09 . chapter 14
...When someone normal comes to the door, or when they go to dinner, does Erik wear his mask? Yea, I'm pretty sure I read half of this once but then I probably got distracted (homework...blah, college kills the Phantom XD). But I'm loving it, and Mr. Nadir hath arrived! I love my Persian man! Keep Going!!
LisalikesPhantom
2008-03-21 . chapter 14
hi!
omg what a cliffy!
i like daroga he's cool :D
nice chpater.
poofie
2008-03-20 . chapter 14
SQUE-AGE! GIMME MORE. NOW.
Tansiana
2008-03-20 . chapter 14
Talk about a cliffhanger! And Erik's keeping things from Meg...bit of trouble in paradise, hm? ...Not that you could really call it paradise, seeing all the problems they've already faced and continue to face...

As always, a brillant chapter. Looking forward to more,
Your friend,
Tansy
Friendly Legolas Sporker
2008-03-20 . chapter 14
I hate you, I hate you, I hate you!
What a terrible cliff hanger.
But you know now I have a reason to bug you if you don't update quickly. *evil grin*
dreamysherry
2008-03-19 . chapter 14
I have yet to read Desire, but I love this fic. It reads well and the characters are convincing. There are nice little touches to make them real. I'm glad to see Nadir's appearance.
Hot4Gerry
2008-03-19 . chapter 14
Oh ho. Nadir has tracked him down. Wonder what he wants? I really want to know what that article said. I'll bet it has something to do with Christine. Hope Erik isn't still all enraptured with her. If he's keeping secrets though that doesn't sound good. If he no longer cared he would not have hidden the article. Glad you gave us another installment.
.Lost-Blue-Phantom.
2008-03-19 . chapter 14
Jesus that scared me. I thought it was Raoul for a second. And THAT would've been scary. Yay Meg! She's just a symbol of independence and worry all at once. Still, gotta love her.

Update soon! And when I'm not so swamped, I'll update AML. I feel bad. I haven't even started the next chapter.
True Urbanite
2008-03-02 . chapter 13
Who wants a long article anyway? lol.

I thought it different and tastefully done, but yes, I agree, it was a long time coming.

Update when you can.
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