i think you could make a story based off of this and i think it would be great please consider it

Oh my god, congrats, that story was so good I feel like crying and it takes a lot to do that. i'm looking forward to reading mor!e of your stories

I love love love love love love this fic! Its so cute, fun and romantic. Great D/Hr. I love their characterization here. The last scene, I was swooning the whole time. I hope you make a sequel. :)

Well. I really didn't expect this story to be as good as it was. You have a gift writing everything in description. I could smell the sea sald whyle Hermione and Draco swam. A standong O for you. Well, I am off the see your profile to hopefully find more fics to read.

PS. If you haven't done so already, you should cosider writing professionally. I love the way you phrase your ideas better than some of the top selling writers.

great story!!

"His smirk faded momentarily. An indecipherable expression ghosted across his features. Before Hermione had time to guess at its meaning, the smirk was back full force."

That is a beautiful paragraph. Too often, authors forget that facial expressions are rarely simple and unambiguous, especially for complex emotions. This is a beautifully realistic detail. Love it!

haha wow nice fanfic =)

yur writing style is good and i quite like it =)

it`s short, but sweet..and portrays a flicker of emotion. congratz on a successful short story ^^

nwaiiz; ohyesh, i like the ending as well =)
hehe hermione can prove kingsley wrong now xDD

nice work.
&& thnx foh it ^^

`tC

this is so unique,
and bloody amazing!
one of my most favorite fics, ever.

:D

WOW WOW WOW WOW! what an incredible story!! this ws so beautifully written, so original and creative, so real and imagined, i can't even begin to explain how much i love this story!! you have a great skill for writing!! i found this on the dramione awards nominee page, and I am DEFINITELY voting for it and rooting for it to win!! It seriously deserves all the praise. GREAT JOB!! can i please recommend this on my profile?? This is a gem of a story! :D LOVED IT!!

I'm really happy with this. It's beautifully written and I love how it flows.

Keep on writing!
;D

i've read this before and loved then too (only i didn't have an account you see) now I can tell you how much i adore and I do you know, adore it i mean. Well i guess thats all keep on writing!

Oh, it's absolutely lovely. I always appreciate an author who does her homework; it makes everything that much better. And I really do like Lemeki. It's rare that I enjoy an OC, and even more rare that I find myself delighted by that whole "noble savage Tonto sidekick" thing, but I think I'll make an exception, because, well, it's Fiji.

Oh my, what a PERFECT ending! When Hermione decided she was leaving Fiji, I was like...WTF. Fiji, and Malfoy...so that's pretty much heaven...why would you leave...but then they were together at last anyway! Very nicely done, dear, definately be looking to you for future works.

It's just lovely! I can tell this will become one of my favorites. Your style is fabulous, as is your word choice and vocabulary. Wonderful!

another good story you should write more!