This is so random I can barely follow it...in a good way :D It's truly hilarious! XD

AWSOME!Me:"Okay,Vanir!You took Murtagh!NOW DIE!"*sets off bomb*

Vanir:"OH GOD!Wai-" ...BOM!

Murtagh:"Awsome!Show me how to do that!"

I'll save you Murtagh!

Sorry, but that whole scar comment was just plain low! I happen to be a big fan of Murtagh, and that was going way too far on the meanness scale! I don't care if you don't like Murtagh, that doesn't make it any less insensitive, and it definitly doesn't make it ok! It may seem silly, but that insult cut me pretty deep!

p.s. I don't think Vanir's blonde

I like your story. “Eragon!” “Come on! What the hell do think your doing!” See that line you had written? If the same person is talking and there's a punctuation mark at the end you don't need more quotation marks... like so. “Eragon! Come on! What the hell do think your doing!”

HAHAHA! *laughing* *majorly* ROFL!

Great fanfic! Please conutied.

Laughs again. This is one of the funniest things I've read, so please update again! Poor Murtagh!

Oh my gosh its WAY funny

Murtagh - sweetie.. honey... HAHA! That was hilarious! I can't wait for the next update, this is insane...

- Anda

Wow...LMAO-this fic is hilarious. You just have to update soon-please! I really think I might enjoy reading it from now on...

OMG this is the worst date ever! and roran-tut tut! (roran looks down guiltily) and arya-you say no to eragon, but when it comes to roran, well...(arya shrugs) AND morzan! she really gets around, doesn't she? her and kaitlin sound like they're gonna be excellent friends!

and as for you, murtagh...hmm...(looks dreamily out window again b4 realises neighbour is giving me really strange look) yes-bb4n

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This was hilarious! Arya's personality is mocked to PERFECTION! HAHAHA! I love it - and Murtagh is soo... lol! I'm speechless...

- Anda

I absolutely LOVE Vanir - he's actually my favourite character. He's bloody hilarious! This was a great chapter!

- Anda

aww poor murtagh keep updating