I haven't played CoTs for a very long time. This story is great. I hope you'll still continue.

It's not just Chester he dislikes, he hates pretty much everyone. But another great chapter, I'm really happy to see that your've updated ^^ and good luck with school

You finally updated! Yay!

And then the curse of the changing tense struck again. Please take care in future chapters...

And another thing. I'm aware that, as you took the names of two major Naruto characters, that you often add the honorifics (-kun, -chan), but eventually they become tiresome. Please dispense with them. Kthxbai

And finally, in some places you will have line after line of 'Sasuke did this, then Sasuke did that, then such and such was stabbed by Sasuke...'

A very different and interesting angle for the story of CoTS. Well played.

Nice formulas... you know I also created Sasuke on Character Creation but his voice sucks. How can you make him say "Your sight irritates me" but my Sasuke says "Come on, come and get me.". My Sakura sucks too. She should be good but she says "You wanna die that badly?" Can you explain on the next chapter how can I change the personality of my characters? Thanks.

Nice chapter Update soon

-Crot

Your doing a great job. Luna can't seem to catch a break, can she? ^_^ But keep up the good work.

can you say 'love triangle'? XP
love it! but watch your tense again...

Great Chapter ^_^ Can't wait to see what happens in the next chap, oh and Happy Birthday! ^.^

Great chapter, even though Chester got hurt, poor Chet-Chet D=> Still, this is a good story ^_^ Hope Sasuke ends up with Sakura

Very nice. And don't feel bad about not updating because it's long. The longer it is, the more action it has! Great job.

great as usual, but you need to watch your tense. sometimes you would mix up past and present tense in one sentence, eg.

'He quickly stabs the man’s chest, making the man spit blood and scream in pain. The enemy... and gets injured. Sasuke looked at him furiously and just kicks the enemy.'

there, you mixed present tense (stabs, making, gets) and past tense (looked). be wary of this in your next chapter.
otherwise, very good job!

Hyle the ballet dancer xD Great chapter, can't wait to see what happens in the next one and yay, Chester

the damned e-mail alerts are not working... but i found this near the top of the page 2day, so it's ok.
this chapter is also, like the others, very enjoyable to read. the only things that bug me about it are...
1. aren't any of your guys going to be knocked out, or even hurt slightly? the game was much harder than you write it to be.
2. more pre- and post-battle speech would be appreciated and make it more storylike.

rant is over.
oh... do i sense a little bit o' aeneasxriese? aenese all the way!

Nice job, but it seems like you're just making them win every battle easily. Maybe a couple minor losses will do. Not getting killed, but just defeated and injured. Winning every time gets a little boring, honestly. But all in all, good job.

Wow, you've got so far...

You know what, I always hated Hyle. He is such a stupid GAY who repeatedly headbutts and kicks like sophitia. Ugh, go Sasuke! KILL that HYLE! Ha ha ha!

Hey, is Sasuke a familliar name? Hehehee, he is my fave character in Naruto too, but I hate Sakura Haruno since she is a shallow annoying little girl...

AeneasxRiese is such a cute pairing. I thought nobody will write any cots fic with this pairing.