Oh please please please PLEASE write a sequel. this was so cool.

i loved this! is it finished? you should make a sequal!

wow, this was a REALLY good story


I LOVE IT HOPE TO SEE MORE SOMEWHAT LIKE IT

THIS STORY HAS COOLNESS WRITTIN' ALL OVER IT

Nice! I love your story
but my most favorite part is
“Activated?” Frick was shocked, “You activated Megatron?”

“Not so loud!”

lol AND

“Give me some privacy! Can’t you see I am engaged in a sexual moment?!”

Well done !!

What a cool story! I had a wonderful time reading it. I love your take on Transformer biology. I wasn't expecting that! I just wanted you to know what an awesome job you did!

Aw, Cute XD Megs loves her *heh* and the letter to Prime *lol*

Wha? It ends like this? C'mon, you need more!

update really soon


Daybreaker go back to Megatron-sama.

w00t! O/O

Come on you got to write us a second part or at least an epilog.(Sorry I can't spell) This was great I loved it.

SQUEE!! Can't wait for the new chappie!!

“Give me some privacy! Can’t you see I am engaged in a sexual moment?!”

ROTFL! I loved that part. I'm adding that to my profile as one of my favorite quotes. This story is so good. I can't wait until you update again.

yay, another chapter!
I like how your still keeping Megatron's character intact and not making him go all soft and bleh. I've seen WAY to much of that lately, and frankly, it makes me want to barf.
Your doing great, please update soon!

good story so far :3

plz write more!

*ROFL* Bwahaha! Awesome XD

Oh that was so good. I can't wait until you update again, please make it soon!